I Spit Fire

A bitter taste for me you've left,
Dishonesty, deceit and theft.
So confident I'd have you back,
Clearly to you respect means jack.
However, once again I'll say,
Find another place to stay!
A second chance is all you had,
But you blew it, oh so bad.
So when you wrap your head around,
You've already lost what you had found.
And this won't change until you choose,
To give up lying, drugs and booze.
So move along, you need to know,
You are to leave, get out, just go!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Pettit Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 12:49 AM
Lying, drugs, and booze are three strong grounds for a divorce. Good write with clear descriptiveness and rhyming.
Sergi Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 8:14 PM
Great one for the contest good luck
Fisher Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 9:16 PM
Awesome rhyme that certainly makes your point. Good luck in the contest, if this is for that.
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