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I Smiled

Days to night
Nights to day

Flowers Bloom
And petals fall

The sun does rise
As the monsoons fall

Twists and turns
the roads we travel

I smiled
The mysteries unraveled

Copyright © Arthur Vaso | Year Posted 2013

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Andrea Dietrich

April 9, 2016 at 8:17 PM

wow, I love this one in all its simplicity. It speaks volumes. Glad I came back to your oldies today.

April 9, 2016 at 10:38 PM

So kind of you, I kinda liked this one, so means a lot to me! Hugs!

Keith Bickerstaffe

March 14, 2013 at 7:07 PM

A nice easy flow with some sweet imagery, culminating in a cool rhyme! BRAVO Arthur!! Best wishes, Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe

April 9, 2016 at 10:55 PM

I appreciate the gesture Arthur... better now than never!!! Keith

April 9, 2016 at 10:39 PM

I suppose being 3 years late to say thank you is a long time, but better late than never! :)

March 3, 2013 at 4:13 AM

Love whimsical little verses like this. Nicely done.

February 24, 2013 at 6:44 AM

The mysteries of life are often sort, but when are known, not what you thought. ...Seren

April 9, 2016 at 10:39 PM

Thank you!

Lillie Williams

February 19, 2013 at 11:46 PM

Excellent, very nice!!!

Charmaine Chircop

February 10, 2013 at 7:54 AM

keep smiling to eaxh mystery of life..Its nice to live and breathe.

April 9, 2016 at 10:40 PM

Thank you, am I late? ok just by a few years!!!! Hugs!

February 9, 2013 at 11:23 PM

Nice read ... Seren

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