I Smiled

Days to night
Nights to day

Flowers Bloom
And petals fall

The sun does rise
As the monsoons fall

Twists and turns
the roads we travel

I smiled
The mysteries unraveled

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Date: 4/9/2016 8:17:00 PM
wow, I love this one in all its simplicity. It speaks volumes. Glad I came back to your oldies today.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/9/2016 10:38:00 PM
So kind of you, I kinda liked this one, so means a lot to me! Hugs!
Date: 3/14/2013 7:07:00 PM
A nice easy flow with some sweet imagery, culminating in a cool rhyme! BRAVO Arthur!! Best wishes, Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/9/2016 10:55:00 PM
I appreciate the gesture Arthur... better now than never!!! Keith
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/9/2016 10:39:00 PM
I suppose being 3 years late to say thank you is a long time, but better late than never! :)
Date: 3/3/2013 4:13:00 AM
Love whimsical little verses like this. Nicely done.
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Date: 2/24/2013 6:44:00 AM
The mysteries of life are often sort, but when are known, not what you thought. ...Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/9/2016 10:39:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/19/2013 11:46:00 PM
Excellent, very nice!!!
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Date: 2/10/2013 7:54:00 AM
keep smiling to eaxh mystery of life..Its nice to live and breathe.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/9/2016 10:40:00 PM
Thank you, am I late? ok just by a few years!!!! Hugs!
Date: 2/9/2013 11:23:00 PM
Nice read ... Seren
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