I Slipped On a Teardrop and Landed

I slipped on a teardrop and landed in muck. No inkling had I of my future bad luck. The tear I had cried started out, oh, so small I’d felt little need to be crying at all. But crying that one single tear was enough To bring to me to this! Now my life’s getting tough. The muck where I landed is not disappearing. And sometimes these days I can feel my eyes tearing. I do what I can though to stop tears from flowing. It doesn’t much matter; the muck just keeps growing. The muck is becoming a loose and wet sand. Yes, quicksand! It pulls me. I reach for a hand. . . Then hands from my loved ones; then hands from each friend. With so many hands out, this can’t be the end! The muck turned to quicksand could swallow me whole, But I must believe that it can’t take my soul. My family and friends are comfort for me. Their hands I grab hold of; then strong I can be. I’ll keep loving life, and I’ll laugh. In a while The quicksand will have to subside, and I’ll smile. I’ll next be the one whose comfort gets handed To one who has slipped on a teardrop and landed. Written 6/21/16 with gratitude for all who were there for me in a trying time Now for PD's Deep ( 001) Poetry Contest
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Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Congrats Andrea on your win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 12:16 AM
Congrats, Andrea on your win. Such a touching poem.
Barden Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 11:13 PM
I love this, Andrea, truly ... this is so full of creativity and grace, and such an amazing message! Congrats on your well-deserved win! :-)
Cozart Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 2:09 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Andrea, but I really hope you are getting regular check-ups and are staying cancer-free.
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 3:37 PM
Of course I am and will be getting checkups at least for the next five years. I thank God that I got a health share plan at the beginning of 2016.
Scars Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 2:09 PM
Lovely Andrea...I remember this contest and I remember my poem was somber and about suicide. You took this theme to a whole new level and wrote such an uplifting piece. thank you and congrats :)
May Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
Roper Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Wonderful sad and uplifting write,Andrea, congratulations on your win :)
Godwin Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 4:29 PM
How did I miss this? This is you at your best - I think I could have figured you the author if I was given the poem and told I was familiar with the person. This is excellent work. I wonder how many poems have been about the muck each poet surely knows! Ode To Muck! Oh, Luck ... CayCay
Breedt Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 5:28 AM
Hi Andrea, nicely done again , congratulations
Kent Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Well, this poem certainly has landed. What a great write.
Arnone Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 2:10 PM
The muck, the muck -- I hate that damned, cursed muck, too! :-)
Watt Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Andrea, I LOVE how you ended this. Such a beautiful write... congrats.
Hagy Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Great write Andrea! I love the rhymes and your style!
Salehi Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Great write Andrea, congratulations ....
Williams Gault Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Back to say, congratulations!
Daniel Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 6:38 AM
This is really beautiful:) Congrats on your win, Andrea:)
Devnath  Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend. A nice 7. Loved always, bl
A  Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Lovely to see you on Cindi's winning list. Skat
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 11:16 AM
I love the message of this poem.....Congratulations
Haight Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Wonderful message in your poem, Andrea. Life's ebbs and flows pull and release, and we all keep reaching for hands or extending our own. Congratulations on your fine win in this Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra
Rockwell Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Andrea, I really loved this poem. I wish I had more top placements to give. The message of this poem is one that so many need to hear. Thank you for sharing and entering my contest.
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Sometimes it is so true that one tear drop can start a landslide that is almost impossible to stop..When we go through something like that we can be an encourager to someone who has fallen into the muck..this one reads like a winner ..Way to go..Thanks for all your visits..Sara
Williams Gault Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 5:18 AM
Loved the pace, the rhyme, wowed by the concept of this piece. And the message, as others have helped you, so shall you help others. Superb!
Babcock Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 8:36 PM
I like the progression of this poem Andrea. Nice one. love phyl
Walker Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 6:31 AM
Wonderful poem sis. I sure hope that you are comforted with family and friends because you have comforted me so many times. Love you sis.
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