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I Slipped On a Teardrop and Landed

I slipped on a teardrop and landed in muck. No inkling had I of my future bad luck. The tear I had cried started out, oh, so small I’d felt little need to be crying at all. But crying that one single tear was enough To bring to me to this! Now my life’s getting tough. The muck where I landed is not disappearing. And sometimes these days I can feel my eyes tearing. I do what I can though to stop tears from flowing. It doesn’t much matter; the muck just keeps growing. The muck is becoming a loose and wet sand. Yes, quicksand! It pulls me. I reach for a hand. . . Then hands from my loved ones; then hands from each friend. With so many hands out, this can’t be the end! The muck turned to quicksand could swallow me whole, But I must believe that it can’t take my soul. My family and friends are comfort for me. Their hands I grab hold of; then strong I can be. I’ll keep loving life, and I’ll laugh. In a while The quicksand will have to subside, and I’ll smile. I’ll next be the one whose comfort gets handed To one who has slipped on a teardrop and landed. Written 6/21/16 with gratitude for all who were there for me in a trying time Now for PD's Deep ( 001) Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/31/2017 9:05:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your win!
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Date: 8/31/2017 12:16:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea on your win. Such a touching poem.
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Date: 8/30/2017 11:13:00 PM
I love this, Andrea, truly ... this is so full of creativity and grace, and such an amazing message! Congrats on your well-deserved win! :-)
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Date: 8/30/2017 2:09:00 PM
Lovely Andrea...I remember this contest and I remember my poem was somber and about suicide. You took this theme to a whole new level and wrote such an uplifting piece. thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 8/30/2017 2:09:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Andrea, but I really hope you are getting regular check-ups and are staying cancer-free.
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Date: 8/30/2017 3:37:00 PM
Of course I am and will be getting checkups at least for the next five years. I thank God that I got a health share plan at the beginning of 2016.
Date: 8/30/2017 1:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 8/30/2017 1:00:00 PM
Wonderful sad and uplifting write,Andrea, congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 12/19/2016 4:29:00 PM
How did I miss this? This is you at your best - I think I could have figured you the author if I was given the poem and told I was familiar with the person. This is excellent work. I wonder how many poems have been about the muck each poet surely knows! Ode To Muck! Oh, Luck ... CayCay
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Date: 7/20/2016 5:28:00 AM
Hi Andrea, nicely done again , congratulations
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Date: 7/16/2016 8:34:00 AM
Well, this poem certainly has landed. What a great write.
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:10:00 PM
The muck, the muck -- I hate that damned, cursed muck, too! :-)
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Date: 6/29/2016 6:05:00 PM
Andrea, I LOVE how you ended this. Such a beautiful write... congrats.
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Date: 6/28/2016 3:55:00 PM
Great write Andrea! I love the rhymes and your style!
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Date: 6/27/2016 9:21:00 AM
Great write Andrea, congratulations ....
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Date: 6/27/2016 7:48:00 AM
Back to say, congratulations!
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Date: 6/27/2016 6:38:00 AM
This is really beautiful:) Congrats on your win, Andrea:)
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Date: 6/25/2016 2:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend. A nice 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/25/2016 1:44:00 PM
Lovely to see you on Cindi's winning list. Skat
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Date: 6/25/2016 11:16:00 AM
I love the message of this poem.....Congratulations
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Date: 6/25/2016 11:09:00 AM
Wonderful message in your poem, Andrea. Life's ebbs and flows pull and release, and we all keep reaching for hands or extending our own. Congratulations on your fine win in this Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/25/2016 9:56:00 AM
Andrea, I really loved this poem. I wish I had more top placements to give. The message of this poem is one that so many need to hear. Thank you for sharing and entering my contest.
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Date: 6/25/2016 8:39:00 AM
Sometimes it is so true that one tear drop can start a landslide that is almost impossible to stop..When we go through something like that we can be an encourager to someone who has fallen into the muck..this one reads like a winner ..Way to go..Thanks for all your visits..Sara
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Date: 6/25/2016 5:18:00 AM
Loved the pace, the rhyme, wowed by the concept of this piece. And the message, as others have helped you, so shall you help others. Superb!
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Date: 6/24/2016 8:36:00 PM
I like the progression of this poem Andrea. Nice one. love phyl
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Date: 6/24/2016 6:31:00 AM
Wonderful poem sis. I sure hope that you are comforted with family and friends because you have comforted me so many times. Love you sis.
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