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I sit with you, My hand rests on your shoulder. I read my book While you sleep restlessly, You have no clue. The night is getting colder, You have that look of age-old tiredness sleeping, of pain and hurt, of hours of fruitless weeping. I sit with you, My voice a soothing rhythm. I recitate My poems, my lines for you It's seeping through Your troublesome subconscious, inner debate... Your eyes open so slightly. I will be here, I'll sit here in this chair, And create words To paint your world lightly And colourful, With butterflying flutter Pulling you through. I sit with you, Because I care, I get you. I know the pain, I know this too will pass. And you know too. *** Copyright © Darren White November 7, 2016

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/19/2017 10:09:00 AM

WoW! Darren, I see why Chris got inspiration from this well written piece. The thought that popped in my mind was "My steady rock." Having a person in your life like you so skillfully wrote about makes a dark world shine very bright. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 11:18:00 AM

Alexis, thank you soooo much!! I loved it that Chris was inspired by this poem of mine :)

Bawa Talwar

Date: 4/19/2017 12:58:00 AM

Exquisite work .I loved it there is love and there's compassion too. A nice piece

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 1:07:00 AM

Thank you so very much, yes there is a lot of love in there :)

Sara Ella

Date: 4/18/2017 11:13:00 PM

Your heart shines through this one, like so many others that your pen, it is a loving poem and I hope that you too have someone sitting with you <3

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 1:06:00 AM

Your reading of this poem is simply beautiful my dear friend :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/18/2017 5:22:00 PM

Oh Darren. Please allow me to say this is stunningly and gently beautiful. I am in poetic awe at this moment reading this. Thank you for sharing your work so freely. I am honored and privileged to turn to your page and entries. Excellent in every way. Honestly.

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 1:04:00 AM

Lisa, thank you for your wonderful comment, I am happy you like this one :)

Chris Green

Date: 4/18/2017 8:30:00 AM

Such a heart touching and emotional piece of writing my friend. You do have a knack for reaching deeply inside and caressing the heart and soul of the reader with your words. Very beautiful Darren.

Darren White
Date: 4/18/2017 8:35:00 AM

Thank you Chris. I am very happy you like this one, my friend. And that you always love my poems so much!

Tim Smith

Date: 4/18/2017 8:02:00 AM

The best thing we can do is to be there for them...Beautiful poem

Darren White
Date: 4/18/2017 8:07:00 AM

Exactly, that Is what I do, and what I always hope someone will do for me. And nowadays they do! My family and my friends :)

Maria Williams

Date: 4/18/2017 7:06:00 AM

Wow Love the poem and the stunning image Darren. How are you my friend? Hope you had a wonderful Easter?

Maria Williams
Date: 4/18/2017 7:47:00 AM

Very good as well and also a birthday for a wonderful little 16 year old, so a double celebration in my daughters house.

Darren White
Date: 4/18/2017 7:09:00 AM

Although I am sick, Easter was great. My little niece's birthday was on Easter, and that was wonderful :) And you?

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/18/2017 5:11:00 AM

I love this Darren! It is life and love painted with the colors of compassion. A fave!

Darren White
Date: 4/18/2017 6:00:00 AM

Thank you for the fave, Connie \o/

Anil Deo

Date: 4/18/2017 3:52:00 AM

thanks and shalom. you are being healed in agape & shalom

Darren White
Date: 4/18/2017 5:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for all your nice words, and your encouragement.

Anil Deo

Date: 4/18/2017 3:52:00 AM

Brother White, we are praying with you & for you. Jesus never cursed & lectured the sick, lepers, poor ... he called the religious leaders and lawyers (Pharisees, scribes, religious judges) "white-washed tombs ... hypocrites ..." and John said they were a "brood of vipers." With the blind, the lame ... he asked if they wanted to be healed When they said YES, they received it. Receive your healing because you love Jesus. (He died for me - a sinner - and for you out of real LOVE, agape &shalom.AD

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/18/2017 3:15:00 AM

Wonderful caring words Darren. #7 Read your comment to Victor - hope you are soon improved.

Darren White
Date: 4/18/2017 5:58:00 AM

Thank you, Elizabeth, also for the 7, and I hope I will feel better soon :)