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I Sip Those Coffee Irises

i sip those coffee irises which beckon my core sans a resounding wave or bawdy utterance the strong, robust urge a breathless yearning i stir that drink with a flirtatious cream i lean into his cup the grind of healthy soil a tasty, deep, romantic bean those eyes ~ my twinge a loving cup pours into every kiss the slide of lips the palming caress oh how those eyes dance in throes the thrill that wakes me up stirs him to sleep content beneath the sheets those coffee irises hidden from my view i’m totally taken 8/1/2022

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Timothy Ray

Date: 8/10/2022 11:38:00 AM

when the mortal exhibits the immortal and why Love is the greatest of them all..a grand job,

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2022 3:12:00 PM

Thanks, Tim!

Bill Baker

Date: 8/5/2022 4:38:00 PM

Wow! nice use of metaphors is this one my friend. Wonderful imagery. Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2022 5:32:00 PM

Thanks so much, Bill!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/2/2022 9:33:00 PM

Oh, a Fave my friend! I loved the sensual metaphors in this romantic poem that heats up the coffee. One of your best for me. Blessings xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2022 5:33:00 PM

Thanks so much, Connie! Blessings to you :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/2/2022 1:19:00 AM

What a lovely poem, it stirs the heart with emotion. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2022 6:36:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/1/2022 8:02:00 PM

Wonderfully romantic, with 'stirring' imagery. :) Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2022 6:36:00 AM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/1/2022 7:25:00 PM

Whew! I need a fire extinguisher after reading this one! ~ Mere 'Coffee Grounds'

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2022 7:46:00 PM

LOL! Thanks :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/1/2022 7:14:00 PM

Dear Kim, your delectable imagery captures the imagination and stirs the thirst. Sumptuous romance in the beauty of your artistry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2022 7:19:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! You made me smile :)

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 8/1/2022 7:19:00 AM

Wow, what a delicious romantic read! I thoroughly enjoyed this Kim. Cheers Anne :-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2022 8:56:00 AM

Thank you, Anne! :)