Bruce Adams Poet Quatrain

I Should Have Stayed In Bed

Tried to stay in Dream Weavers world ,silenced alarm
     Back to dream weavers sow
     Hour late for work, I'm a charm
     Freeway flat tire, rain and snow

     Clothes soaking wet, slipped wrench injured hand
     So late for work, speeding ticket mine
     Boss shaking head, strike up the band
     Injured hand dropped heavy box, foot not fine

    Finally home, slipped on ice like sled
    I can see stars, 20 IQ points lost
    Broke arm too, in hospital rest my head
    Dream weavers world I'll stay, except now it will cost !
    

    01/26/2017  It's time for hilarious poetry contest of Jamie Pan

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Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2017 at 3:43 PM this was your second best poem at Soup. If I can find no new poems to see, I will be telling you your best ones!!! See ya later, alligator.

Lewis Raynes February 26, 2017 at 10:08 PM lol.... hate those days. this is funny. always gotta see the bright side. :)

Andrea Dietrich January 30, 2017 at 3:10 PM Sounds like a good example of 'when it rains, it pours" It was nice and funny,Bruce. Too bad how this contest got judged!! Bruce Adams February 26, 2017 at 8:12 PM Thank you, my life is a dark comedy !

John Herlihy January 29, 2017 at 11:02 PM A common enough feeling; I think we all sometimes wish we had stayed in bed for our own different reasons. Great idea and enjoyed the poem. JH Bruce Adams February 26, 2017 at 8:11 PM Thank you, I've had many days when I wished I would have stayed in bed.