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I Should Have Avoided the Candy

I should have avoided the candy while it was conveniently handy. If I had the power to abstain, I would not be experiencing this pain. I have a toothache while I live. Seeing the dentist is the only alternative. Inspired by another member's poem.

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Robin Davis

Date: 3/3/2014 11:08:00 PM

Robert This is a cute and creative write. Candy is an "evil" treat that is addictive and pulls you in. LOL Thanks for the nice comment on my Birthday poem.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/17/2012 6:16:00 PM

Yes, candy will do that to you...I have a mouth full of filled cavities from all my Halloween candy I've eaten throughout my life, ha ha! Thank goodness for Dentist's though, to save your teeth! They have saved mine many times now! This is a wondrous write my friend, fantastic piece, Great Work!!