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I Shall Whisper Sweet Nothings To You

When dusk arrives each night, I shall whisper sweet nothings, when the door closes I shall tenderly show passion- We know that love is not material items or diamond rings, but a wholeness filled with adoration and compassion. I shall kiss you gently as the ivory dove sweetly sings, for a merciful and kind life your heart brings. All noise shall go away, and I shall comfort with ease, when darkness hovers I shall reveal my desires- A hush here and there and then your pain will cease, as the beauty of our great love tenderly transpires. We shall walk hand and hand in the crisp morn’ breeze, and together see the hope and faith no one else sees. Soft and kind we shall defeat all who try to steal our joy and happiness when we are together- For you have given me devotion, my heart you did heal, and we shall walk a path of love forever and ever. When we said our wedding vows we made a deal, that until eternity ends, this love we shall feel. Sweet nothings I shall whisper to you each night, and we shall begin anew the very next day- With you by my side I shall always see the light, and write rhymes of fondness sometimes I can’t say. When I am blinded by pain, you are my sight, sweet nothings I shall whisper to you each night. November 16, 2017

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Date: 12/14/2017 8:27:00 PM
STUNNING MY FRIEND! Another fav for my list.....
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2017 12:08:00 PM
many thanks dear Robert and for the soupie! lol be blessed dear friend! :) -luloo
Date: 12/12/2017 9:22:00 AM
absolutely beautiful
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Date: 12/16/2017 12:08:00 PM
many thanks Niketa ;) -luloo
Date: 12/1/2017 8:55:00 PM
This is the (sixth?) time I've read this, and still gleaning enjoyment fully ... love it! Number two on the Best New list, too - awesome - another congrats!
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Date: 12/16/2017 12:08:00 PM
thank you sweet Greg! You are the best! :) -luloo
Date: 11/28/2017 5:37:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading this romantic love poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 12/16/2017 12:07:00 PM
thank you sweet lady, you too! :) -luloo
Date: 11/28/2017 6:06:00 AM
A beautiful love poem Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2017 12:07:00 PM
thank you dear James :)-luloo
Date: 11/22/2017 9:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win and for being top poem on top 100! I think that's a milestone for you!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2017 12:06:00 PM
thank you Dear John for all your kindness :) -luloo
Date: 11/21/2017 5:26:00 PM
aww what a romantic gem Luloo:-) Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2017 12:06:00 PM
many thanks sweet Jan :) -luloo
Date: 11/20/2017 6:19:00 AM
What a super poem, Laura, and a well deserved win. Congratulations!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2017 12:06:00 PM
thank you sweet Curtis :) -luloo
Date: 11/18/2017 3:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Laura!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/19/2017 8:21:00 AM
thank you dear Greg! Be blessed :)
Date: 11/16/2017 8:17:00 PM
Very sensuous - a lovely poem, Laura. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/17/2017 7:03:00 AM
thank you sweetest poet :)
Date: 11/16/2017 6:36:00 PM
So beautiful to read.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/17/2017 7:02:00 AM
thank you dear Sunlite :)
Date: 11/16/2017 7:31:00 AM
I wish I could say these words to someone. This is just so amazing, Laura! You have a natural flow and even if this had more stanzas, I wouldn't get tired reading it. I am faving this one for sure~Cheers REd~
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/17/2017 7:02:00 AM
awww thank you sweet Red!!! :)

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