I Shall Whisper Sweet Nothings To You

When dusk arrives each night, I shall whisper sweet nothings, when the door closes I shall tenderly show passion- We know that love is not material items or diamond rings, but a wholeness filled with adoration and compassion. I shall kiss you gently as the ivory dove sweetly sings, for a merciful and kind life your heart brings. All noise shall go away, and I shall comfort with ease, when darkness hovers I shall reveal my desires- A hush here and there and then your pain will cease, as the beauty of our great love tenderly transpires. We shall walk hand and hand in the crisp morn’ breeze, and together see the hope and faith no one else sees. Soft and kind we shall defeat all who try to steal our joy and happiness when we are together- For you have given me devotion, my heart you did heal, and we shall walk a path of love forever and ever. When we said our wedding vows we made a deal, that until eternity ends, this love we shall feel. Sweet nothings I shall whisper to you each night, and we shall begin anew the very next day- With you by my side I shall always see the light, and write rhymes of fondness sometimes I can’t say. When I am blinded by pain, you are my sight, sweet nothings I shall whisper to you each night. November 16, 2017
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Lindley Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 8:27 PM
STUNNING MY FRIEND! Another fav for my list.....
Scars Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:08 PM
many thanks dear Robert and for the soupie! lol be blessed dear friend! :) -luloo
Mckenzie Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 9:22 AM
absolutely beautiful
Scars Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:08 PM
many thanks Niketa ;) -luloo
Barden Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:55 PM
This is the (sixth?) time I've read this, and still gleaning enjoyment fully ... love it! Number two on the Best New list, too - awesome - another congrats!
Scars Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:08 PM
thank you sweet Greg! You are the best! :) -luloo
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 5:37 PM
I have enjoyed reading this romantic love poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Scars Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:07 PM
thank you sweet lady, you too! :) -luloo
Inman Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 6:06 AM
A beautiful love poem Laura.
Scars Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:07 PM
thank you dear James :)-luloo
Hamilton Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 9:10 PM
Congrats on your win and for being top poem on top 100! I think that's a milestone for you!
Scars Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:06 PM
thank you Dear John for all your kindness :) -luloo
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 5:26 PM
aww what a romantic gem Luloo:-) Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:06 PM
many thanks sweet Jan :) -luloo
Moorman Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 6:19 AM
What a super poem, Laura, and a well deserved win. Congratulations!
Scars Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:06 PM
thank you sweet Curtis :) -luloo
Barden Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 3:36 AM
Congrats on your win, Laura!
Scars Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 8:21 AM
thank you dear Greg! Be blessed :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Very sensuous - a lovely poem, Laura. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Scars Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 7:03 AM
thank you sweetest poet :)
Wanter Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 6:36 PM
So beautiful to read.
Scars Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 7:02 AM
thank you dear Sunlite :)
Fiery Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 7:31 AM
I wish I could say these words to someone. This is just so amazing, Laura! You have a natural flow and even if this had more stanzas, I wouldn't get tired reading it. I am faving this one for sure~Cheers REd~
Scars Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 7:02 AM
awww thank you sweet Red!!! :)
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