Notes About The Poem

I See You Potw

Where are you God?
Where are you?
I see you.
I see you
in the clouds as you influence them to swell,
and nudge each other in the ocean of blue sky;
like galleon ships
carrying cargo of tears.
I see you,
in the cool breeze.
The breeze embraces
and leaves a scent around my soul.
I see you.
I see you in the trees,
as your good nature banters each leaf;
they sway and brighten their colors
with your touching influence.
I see you,
in the birds singing in your presence
glorifying your lovingkindness.
I see you,
in my neighbors
those that have become friends
and those that wave from afar.
In awe, who touch my heart.
I see you.


7/29/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hankins Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Somehow I missed your P.O.T.W. I must have been away or sloughing off, Eve. Many BELATED CONGRATULATIONS!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 5:33 PM
Congrats on POTW. I am thrilled for you!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 2:12 PM
revisiting to congratulate you, Eve. An excellent spiritual poem. Love and hugs ~ Mala
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 7:51 PM
thank you again for your revisit, Malabika, and inspiring comment. Hugs Eve
Koplin Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations Eve on your potw! Thank you so much for the book you sent. Beautifully done! It’s my first poetry book.
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 7:48 PM
Mark, thank you so much for the visit and inspiring comment. I am so glad you like the book. Thank you were a great part of its creation. Hugs Eve,
Seeker Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 4:39 AM
Congrats on POTW, Eve! May all be blessed with oneness consciousness
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 7:44 PM
Thank you, Unseeking Seeker, for the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Fenn Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 3:07 PM
What a verse full of beauty I am sure God smiles on. Congrats on POTW! Hugs!
Roper Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Thank you , Jennifer.
Lindley Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 3:30 AM
Congratulations on POTW my friend. Your very fine verses sing of light and true faith. A fav. God bless....
Roper Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Thank you,Robert.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 1:46 PM
That’s beautiful Eve, I once wrote a poem on the site with the same theme - titled “Reflections of God”. Congratulations on poem of the week, enjoy the honour… Belle
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 10:54 PM
Thank you, Belle, for the congratulations. Bless you dear friend. Hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Hi Eve, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 10:53 PM
Thank you, Alexis, for your return visit with congratulations. A very unexpected honor. Bless you dear friend. Hugs Eve
Kitchin Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 4:17 AM
Beautiful Eve, congratulations on POTW!
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 10:52 PM
Thank you, Tania, for the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 12:45 AM
Wonderful write Eve. God is everywhere, you described it beautifully. Congratulations on your well deserved POTW. Enjoy the honour
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 10:51 PM
Rama, thank you so much for the visit and inspiring comment. Hugs Eve
Nicole Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 6:48 PM
God is everywhere, and my heart rejoices knowing this truth. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Your thoughts caress softly around my soul. Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Week. :) Hugs, Brandy
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:29 PM
Thank you, Brandy, for the congratulations. I am glad you could feel the same as I did when I wrote this. Bless you dear friend. Hugs Eve
Proxenos Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Hi Eve, POTW congratulations by the score dear friend. I will be buying your book this coming week as I went online but could only open the front and back page. I am longing to see it. Don't know if you know that I have posted a book on Kindle e-books, Ann Foster helped me, such a dear dear person. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:29 PM
Thank you, Jennifer, for the congratulations. No , I didn't know you had published a book. I am tickled that Ann had helped you. She mentioned she would help me as well, but I had already had published a few on my own. God bless her that she is wanting to help us. Bless you dear friend. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 8:49 AM
Eve, beautiful and peaceful. Congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE WEEK, enjoy the honor ~ love and serenity _Constance
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:26 PM
Thank you, Constance, for the congratulations. I am glad you feel the peacefulness. I am so grateful for your constant support. Bless you dear friend. Hugs Eve
Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. What a beautiful/inspirational write. Yes, we can see Him everywhere if only we look. Love This. Have a blessed day......................
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:25 PM
Thank you, Paula, for the congratulations. I am glad you liked it . Bless you dear friend. Hugs Eve
Merryman Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 6:51 AM
Back to congratulate you on your POTW honor, Eve! So deserving! Blessings, Kim M
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:18 PM
Kim, thank you for coming back for the congratulations. . Bless you dear friend. Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 6:14 AM
BIG congrats Eve on poem of the week. Much peace and serenity in these words of faith.
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:17 PM
Thank you,Vijay, for the congratulations. I am glad you could feel the same as I did when I wrote this. Bless you dear friend. Hugs Eve
Cunningham Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 2:47 AM
Without doubt he is everywhere Eve, we just have to open our eyes. Congratulations on POTW, enjoy the honour. Tom
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Thank you, Tom, for the congratulations on POTW. Very surprised to open my mail to show comments on this poem and to see it was picked. I am honored and grateful for your constant support. God bless you. Hugs Eve.
Y. Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 5:44 PM
WoW! Eve, You have penned such a well-written spiritual write. I agree God is seen in everything that you wrote about and so much more. I'm adding this to my fav collection. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:12 PM
Thank you, Alex, for your constant support and the fav. I am glad you liked it. Bless you my friend. Hugs Eve
Horsman Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Wow, Eve this is a classic belonging the old school. So inspirational for the modern school. Love it.
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:11 PM
Thank you, Harry, I am glad you liked it. Bless you my friend. Hugs Eve
Rose  Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 3:06 PM
We are transient beings that can see someone in every tangible item and un-tangible place, even heaven, Much love dear friend, xo
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:10 PM
Thank you, Mystic, . Bless you my friend. Hugs Eve
Buhagiar Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 1:11 AM
A very touching inspirational poem. One of your best.
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:09 PM
Thank you, Victor, I am honored and grateful for your constant support. God bless you. Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Perfect! A FAVE right away for me. Thanks, Eve. :) gw
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Thank you, Gershon, for the perfect and the Fave. I don't get very many of those. I am glad you liked it. God Bless you . Hugs Eve
Mcintosh Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Yes! I see Him everywhere.. Wonderful poetry. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Thank you, Regina, I am glad you liked it. Bless you to you as well. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Eve, beautifully penned, yes, if we look we can see God everywhere, i have finished my poem, Holding Back Tears now if you wish to come back ~ love and serenity _Constance
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Thank you, Constance, I am glad you liked it. Bless you to you as well. Hugs Eve
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