I See You, Mary Lee


I am often underused and often underestimated 
a zing of a thing that often goes unheard, unseen  
ginger beer is a tonic unlike me it can't be grated 
a powerful root so astute, they bring from overseas 

The captain gives his orders but I see you Mary Lee
sitting in your cabin drinking tea and writing poetry    
flotsam and jetsam are marked on the ship, but me 
I float above the rest and so I heal you, Mary Lee  

The imp skipped merrily hugging his Jack Daniel 
the sun was too hot so he knocked on every door 
looking for a bed for him and his invisible Faneuil  
she opens it a peep and finds him on the floor  

Mr. Gargoyle tie askew in dire need of ginger root
"Oh Dear!" says Miss Lee, your drunk but very cute. 


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rolland Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 12:41 AM
you have so much talent, won i want a drink, thanks for the enchanting poem
Buhagiar Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 9:08 AM
Occasionally I got drunk, but it left an unpleasant aftertaste. Now I stick to fine red Italian or French wine and only one glass at lunchtime. A lovely smooth poem that made me smile. Hugs.
Rose  Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 3:56 PM
an occasional drink does not make drunk but a happy heart, enjoy the vino and be happy my friend :)
Greenhough Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 10:43 PM
Pleasantly humorous, I enjoyed this sonnet.
Rose  Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 3:56 PM
A touch of humor a touch of real Hilda, thanks for reading :)
One Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Hey Vienna my friend.. Your poem beautifully captures the essence of being undervalued and underestimated, likening itself to the often overlooked ginger root. The speaker expresses a sense of being unseen and unheard, much like the root that remains grated but powerful, astute, and brought from distant lands... i hope you do not feel like this..
Rose  Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 2:35 PM
lol, there are days, but mostly I don't, you seem to read my mind and heart quite often, :)
Empress Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 8:07 AM
Ah this is so creative and the way your words flow is beyond seamless dear sweet rose; i love the way youv delivered this in the most engaging manner, especially how you wrote “ i see you i feel you “ thats touching. And truly reached my soul too! As its not always one feels seen. “ i heal you “ love that too. I think in real life too you are healing. Your storytelling skills are something i admire as i am not very good with that: i hope i could oneday write tho. Pleasure reading your work.
Rose  Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 2:35 PM
I love telling stories, lol, glad you enjoyed it Ink, :)
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