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I See Only You

In the crowded room alone you’re the only one between silhouettes shadows that disappear like stars when the sun rises. © Harry J Horsman 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/14/2015 4:11:00 PM

How beautiful...love the comparison with nature - "like stars when the sun rises"... very romantic and intriguing. Always, Laura

Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 7:04:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Skat A

Date: 6/27/2015 2:05:00 AM

Harry, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love

Daver Austin

Date: 6/15/2015 10:52:00 AM

Yes! How a tempting presence will isolate two people in a crowd. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2015 11:55:00 PM

thanks for your visit today and I still LOVE this poem!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/10/2015 6:02:00 AM

Now this is love! The rest of the world fades into shadow. Beautiful!

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/8/2015 1:01:00 PM

Harry, this is a beauty.. especially love that second line ;) hope things are going great with with you. Enjoy the week ahead as well ;)

Daver Austin

Date: 6/5/2015 2:27:00 PM

"Between silhouettes" - a great entry into the mystic. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2015 11:47:00 PM

Harry, there is one more day for that queen of England contest. Let's see you do one for the queen. Unless the queen of hearts senryu was it?

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/4/2015 12:25:00 PM

This is a beautiful story, laid out well and described with feelings written with the heart and edited by the soul. Emile.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/4/2015 9:40:00 AM

I have experience this very phenomenon and I have been with her ever since. She continues to be the sun in my room. This is perfect Harry!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/3/2015 8:23:00 PM

Love those silhouettes, and shadows. Another skilled write.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2015 5:23:00 PM

ooh. likening her to the sun. Love that, harry!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/3/2015 12:31:00 PM

Very deep love of true heart, ifeel. In the crowd only she is seen and others are like silhouettes. Extreme beauty of love is expressed with a very few words. Outstanding Poem, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus

Date: 6/2/2015 2:27:00 PM

How very romantic, Harry!! Hope she lights up your life! All the best. // paul

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/2/2015 2:24:00 PM

another good one harry I love it xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/2/2015 2:23:00 PM

how have you been , harry?.. my, you make me drool over this delightfully graceful tanka!.. huggs!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/2/2015 8:56:00 AM

Harry...you've been MIA for a while now. I've missed you. This is Eileen. I have new pen name...for a while. This is just superb, Harry....Like stars when the sunrises...what a line. Hugs

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/2/2015 8:31:00 AM

Excellent. Deep and romantic write. Enjoyed. TFS

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/2/2015 8:24:00 AM

How lovely and romantic, Harry. If my husband wrote this for me, I would tape it to my sun visor and read it morning and night! Thanks for your visit this morning. I'm grateful you added to my audience of one. I did read it to my two-year-old, but he didn't really appreciate it. (Mother Goose is his favorite post.) Hugs, Rhonda

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/2/2015 7:51:00 AM

Aww that is super sweet!