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I See Nothing

I see no cloud, no sky
I see neither the moon nor the sun
I see no shrub nor any fly
I see no glee nor any fun
I feel not better nor any fine
I see no rays, nor the morn
I see no smile nor a cry
I see no cloud nor any storm
I see no rain, nor the star
I see nothing, I see none

Copyright © White Sage | Year Posted 2016

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Pashang Salehi Date: 2/8/2016 2:15:00 AM I understood! Your place is the No Place, your image might be without face... both your body and your soul, they both came from divine whole.... see what I see! Login to Reply White Sage Date: 2/8/2016 9:12:00 AM excellent you Pashang, you've seen through half the words....I appreciate your comment

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 2/2/2016 6:58:00 AM Understood moment's like that. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 2/2/2016 9:00:00 AM thanks Iris, i appreciate your lovely comment

Funom Makama Date: 1/19/2016 8:34:00 AM Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7 Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/19/2016 4:17:00 PM thanks Funom

Pashang Salehi Date: 1/13/2016 5:40:00 PM I am with Silent one on this .... There are beauties and there are malice. It depends where to look. Open your eyes my friend, you're sad. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/13/2016 5:55:00 PM thanks Pashang...I appreciate you coming by....will surely do

Michael Whatley Date: 1/11/2016 6:35:00 AM Lovely use of repetition White. I really like the style of this one. Quite enigmatic indeed. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/11/2016 1:56:00 PM thanks Michael

Emile Pinet Date: 1/8/2016 5:06:00 PM You sum up nicely how depression effects all aspects of your existence. Your words speak with the power of experience and your mind set flows onto the page and we can commiserate with you. Emile. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/8/2016 5:49:00 PM its great having you come by...thanks Emile

Dalia Shahein Date: 1/8/2016 5:06:00 PM This is very strong and creative poem but very sad and deep my friend , you should be more optimistic but great write though , hugs / / :) dalia Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/8/2016 5:46:00 PM thanks dear friend, am glad you gave a comment

Eve Roper Date: 1/8/2016 3:12:00 PM Are you in a cell with no windows or are your emotions stopping you to see ? :-) read my comment to improve! Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/8/2016 3:33:00 PM its just like in a situation where there's no reason, you're just down...thanks for coming by Eve

Jan Allison Date: 1/8/2016 3:09:00 PM deep and sad white sage:-( hugs Jan xx Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/8/2016 5:44:00 PM I pray that sunshine comes wit a beautiful beam dear Jan Jan Allison Date: 1/8/2016 3:36:00 PM I think many of us feel like this at the moment White Sage i long for sunshine to brighten my life:-) hugs Jan xx White Sage Date: 1/8/2016 3:31:00 PM its sad how nothing comes and just spoil the day, I guess moods have got a remote to control them...thanks Jan