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I See Nothing

I see no cloud, no sky I see neither the moon nor the sun I see no shrub nor any fly I see no glee nor any fun I feel not better nor any fine I see no rays, nor the morn I see no smile nor a cry I see no cloud nor any storm I see no rain, nor the star I see nothing, I see none

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/8/2016 2:15:00 AM

I understood! Your place is the No Place, your image might be without face... both your body and your soul, they both came from divine whole.... see what I see!

White Sage
Date: 2/8/2016 9:12:00 AM

excellent you Pashang, you've seen through half the words....I appreciate your comment

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 2/2/2016 6:58:00 AM

Understood moment's like that.

White Sage
Date: 2/2/2016 9:00:00 AM

thanks Iris, i appreciate your lovely comment

Funom Makama

Date: 1/19/2016 8:34:00 AM

Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7

White Sage
Date: 1/19/2016 4:17:00 PM

thanks Funom

Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/13/2016 5:40:00 PM

I am with Silent one on this .... There are beauties and there are malice. It depends where to look. Open your eyes my friend, you're sad.

White Sage
Date: 1/13/2016 5:55:00 PM

thanks Pashang...I appreciate you coming by....will surely do

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/11/2016 6:35:00 AM

Lovely use of repetition White. I really like the style of this one. Quite enigmatic indeed.

White Sage
Date: 1/11/2016 1:56:00 PM

thanks Michael

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/8/2016 5:06:00 PM

You sum up nicely how depression effects all aspects of your existence. Your words speak with the power of experience and your mind set flows onto the page and we can commiserate with you. Emile.

White Sage
Date: 1/8/2016 5:49:00 PM

its great having you come by...thanks Emile

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/8/2016 5:06:00 PM

This is very strong and creative poem but very sad and deep my friend , you should be more optimistic but great write though , hugs / / :) dalia

White Sage
Date: 1/8/2016 5:46:00 PM

thanks dear friend, am glad you gave a comment

Eve Roper

Date: 1/8/2016 3:12:00 PM

Are you in a cell with no windows or are your emotions stopping you to see ? :-) read my comment to improve!

White Sage
Date: 1/8/2016 3:33:00 PM

its just like in a situation where there's no reason, you're just down...thanks for coming by Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 1/8/2016 3:09:00 PM

deep and sad white sage:-( hugs Jan xx

White Sage
Date: 1/8/2016 5:44:00 PM

I pray that sunshine comes wit a beautiful beam dear Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 1/8/2016 3:36:00 PM

I think many of us feel like this at the moment White Sage i long for sunshine to brighten my life:-) hugs Jan xx

White Sage
Date: 1/8/2016 3:31:00 PM

its sad how nothing comes and just spoil the day, I guess moods have got a remote to control them...thanks Jan