I See My Love Blossom

In the jingle of your bracelet,
In the kohl that lined your inquisitive eyes,
In the softness of your lips,
I see my love soothing. 
 
In the changing colors of the sky,
In the delicate ensemble of the words, 
In the early morning drizzle,
I see your acceptance of my love.  
 
In the depth of the night sky,
In tequila sunsets,
In the shadows of dusk,
I see our love blossom. 
 
In the tangerine mornings,
In the droplets of water hanging on your hair,
In the blush that rises on your cheeks,
I see our love shining. 
 
In the base of our throat, 
In the half-opened crayons box, 
In the edge of the rose-tinted clouds
I see our love immortalized.
 
In the soft moonlight 
In the paper boat merrily drifting 
In the changing temperature  
I see the world envying.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A. Sharma Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Nehal.
Gentry Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 8:20 PM
Again, congratulations! :)
Raven Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Hi M Asim, dropping by with Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad
Nehal Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:02 PM
Thanks much.....
A   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 10:26 AM
M Asim, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
A  Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:02 AM
M Asim, thank you for the support. :) SK
Nehal Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Welcome anytime....My pleasure.
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 9:03 PM
Hi, M Asim, thank you for the kind reply
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 10:33 AM
M Asim, Congratulations on your "VALENTINE POEM OF YOUR CHOICE win!!!" LINDA
Nehal Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Thank u so much Poet.....I appreciate your comment, Linda..
Kimathi Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Hi Asim. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Nehal Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Thanks Much,Teddy.........
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 12:59 AM
M Asim, This brought tears to my eyes. It is worded so beautifully. I would like to see it featured or POTD so more poets could enjoy it. It brought out so many emotions from me. Truly a love poem that is so deserving of the honor of first place. It is going into my favorite folder right now my friend! Bravo and Blessings, Connie #7
Nehal Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Thanks u so much Ms. Connie, I will cherish your comments forever.
A  Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 10:48 PM
M Asim,, Congratulations on your Valentine win. Love **SKAT**
Nehal Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:33 AM
Thank u so much SKAT....
Tagore Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 10:12 PM
Lovely poem, Asim. Cheers, Bobby
Nehal Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:33 AM
Thanks much , Bobby
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 5:51 PM
such lovely imagery M Asim many congrats on your win in the Valentines day contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Nehal Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:34 AM
Thank u so much, Jan.....
Gentry Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful expression poem.
Nehal Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:34 AM
Thank u so much Susan....
Scars Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo
Nehal Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:35 AM
Thanks much ....Luloo..
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