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I See My Love Blossom

In the jingle of your bracelet, In the kohl that lined your inquisitive eyes, In the softness of your lips, I see my love soothing. In the changing colors of the sky, In the delicate ensemble of the words, In the early morning drizzle, I see your acceptance of my love. In the depth of the night sky, In tequila sunsets, In the shadows of dusk, I see our love blossom. In the tangerine mornings, In the droplets of water hanging on your hair, In the blush that rises on your cheeks, I see our love shining. In the base of our throat, In the half-opened crayons box, In the edge of the rose-tinted clouds I see our love immortalized. In the soft moonlight In the paper boat merrily drifting In the changing temperature I see the world envying.

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Date: 2/17/2016 11:11:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Nehal.
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:20:00 PM
Again, congratulations! :)
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:29:00 PM
Hi M Asim, dropping by with Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad
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M Asim Nehal
Date: 2/17/2016 2:02:00 PM
Thanks much.....
Date: 2/17/2016 10:26:00 AM
M Asim, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:02:00 AM
M Asim, thank you for the support. :) SK
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:32:00 AM
Welcome anytime....My pleasure.
Date: 2/6/2016 9:03:00 PM
Hi, M Asim, thank you for the kind reply
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Date: 2/6/2016 10:33:00 AM
M Asim, Congratulations on your "VALENTINE POEM OF YOUR CHOICE win!!!" LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 1:50:00 PM
Thank u so much Poet.....I appreciate your comment, Linda..
Date: 2/5/2016 7:50:00 AM
Hi Asim. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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M Asim Nehal
Date: 2/5/2016 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Much,Teddy.........
Date: 2/4/2016 12:59:00 AM
M Asim, This brought tears to my eyes. It is worded so beautifully. I would like to see it featured or POTD so more poets could enjoy it. It brought out so many emotions from me. Truly a love poem that is so deserving of the honor of first place. It is going into my favorite folder right now my friend! Bravo and Blessings, Connie #7
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M Asim Nehal
Date: 2/4/2016 5:58:00 AM
Thanks u so much Ms. Connie, I will cherish your comments forever.
Date: 2/2/2016 10:48:00 PM
M Asim,, Congratulations on your Valentine win. Love **SKAT**
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M Asim Nehal
Date: 2/3/2016 3:33:00 AM
Thank u so much SKAT....
Date: 2/2/2016 10:12:00 PM
Lovely poem, Asim. Cheers, Bobby
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M Asim Nehal
Date: 2/3/2016 3:33:00 AM
Thanks much , Bobby
Date: 2/2/2016 5:51:00 PM
such lovely imagery M Asim many congrats on your win in the Valentines day contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:34:00 AM
Thank u so much, Jan.....
Date: 2/2/2016 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful expression poem.
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M Asim Nehal
Date: 2/3/2016 3:34:00 AM
Thank u so much Susan....
Date: 2/2/2016 5:20:00 PM
Congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo
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M Asim Nehal
Date: 2/3/2016 3:35:00 AM
Thanks much ....Luloo..

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