Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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''I See'' Colors and Stars Repeatedly

In my dream,
             that is my sweet meditation;
colors begin shifting and the stars gleam,
I float blissful with no destination.
                           I just drift,
in this delightful spiritual gift;
where clouds of dark rose pink and deep blue shift.
      Oh, where am I going,
             there is a whisper wind blowing;
                           and flowing.
I never imagined this hue and scheme,
            oh, thank you spirits for this creation;
      now, please aim me home swift;
            slow-   as we pass those stars glowing.

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February 9, 2019


Written for the contest, Tell Me What Do You See
sponsor, James Edward Lee Sr.

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Paul Marc February 23, 2019 at 8:57 PM Well said - congrats on your win!

Valerie Staton February 23, 2019 at 2:54 AM Nicely penned! Constance La France February 23, 2019 at 9:24 AM Valerie, thanks for visiting with the compliment ~

Sunlite Wanter February 9, 2019 at 6:16 PM I just let go and let your words flow over me! Enjoyed it so much. Constance La France February 23, 2019 at 9:24 AM Sun, thanks for visiting, happy my poem made you flow ~

M. L. Kiser February 9, 2019 at 2:12 PM I "fav'd" this one; you've painted such a lovely picture. Constance La France February 23, 2019 at 9:25 AM ML, thanks for the visit and the FAV !!!

Sand Blown February 9, 2019 at 11:48 AM andt...if such should indicate the nature of an afterlife : ) Constance La France February 23, 2019 at 9:26 AM Sand thanks for visiting and the comment ~