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''I See'' Colors and Stars Repeatedly

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In my dream, that is my sweet meditation; colors begin shifting and the stars gleam, I float blissful with no destination. I just drift, in this delightful spiritual gift; where clouds of dark rose pink and deep blue shift. Oh, where am I going, there is a whisper wind blowing; and flowing. I never imagined this hue and scheme, oh, thank you spirits for this creation; now, please aim me home swift; slow- as we pass those stars glowing. __________________________ February 9, 2019 Written for the contest, Tell Me What Do You See sponsor, James Edward Lee Sr.

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Date: 2/23/2019 8:57:00 PM
Well said - congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/23/2019 2:54:00 AM
Nicely penned!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2019 9:24:00 AM
Valerie, thanks for visiting with the compliment ~
Date: 2/9/2019 6:16:00 PM
I just let go and let your words flow over me! Enjoyed it so much.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2019 9:24:00 AM
Sun, thanks for visiting, happy my poem made you flow ~
Date: 2/9/2019 2:12:00 PM
I "fav'd" this one; you've painted such a lovely picture.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2019 9:25:00 AM
ML, thanks for the visit and the FAV !!!
Date: 2/9/2019 11:48:00 AM
andt...if such should indicate the nature of an afterlife : )
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2019 9:26:00 AM
Sand thanks for visiting and the comment ~

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