I See Beyond

I see beyond the dimness Of the distant hazy past, Into the book of knowledge, And I'm homeward bound at last. I see beyond myself, Into your loving ways, I see beyond so many things I didn't yesterday. I see beyond the anger, I see beyond the pain, I see beyond my waywardness, I see beyond the gain. I see beyond tomorrow, I see beyond today, I see beyond humanity, I see beyond the grave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Cloyd Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 8:29 PM
I liked this very much. Well done. Brent
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 9:56 PM
Thank you, Brent, glad you liked it.
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 8:29 PM
GREAT poem. I love the rhythmic flow of it.Very well deserving of the winners' list! congratulations.
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 9:56 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea!
Gorelick Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 8:03 PM
I see... you becoming a fine poet..well done and congrats. BG
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Thank you, Barbara!
Johnson Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:18 PM
sounds like enlightenment, great poetry here! Don
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Thank you, Don!
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December 27, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Very well written,Denise.--- Congratulations!! OXOX love Anne-Lise
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Thank you, Ann-Lise!
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 2:30 PM
Very good to be able to see beyond most of these..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Thank you very much, Sara. God bless you always!
Brown Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "I See Beyond" contest Denise. Love, Carol
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 9:35 AM
What a total delight to come on here to all of your sweet comments. Thank you so much, God bless you always, Denise
Brown Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 5:02 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Denise. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Thank you very much, Carol, I've some time this morning to devote to reading and commenting. May you always find joy in life as well! God bless, Denise/Pokey
Quigley Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 10:24 PM
Well written Denise. Congratulations
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Thank you very much, Bob. It was a wonderful delight to find here today. God bless you always,
Johnson Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Great poem ad congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 9:38 AM
Thank you, Joyce. I had much fun penning this a couple of days ago. God bless you always.
Williams Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Denise congrats on your win..David
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 9:38 AM
Thank you very much, David. have a blessed day,
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December 25, 2011 at 9:50 PM
Thank you for your comment on my poem- I am not sure how it all works here yet- My apologizes if I am commenting in the wrong place. I just read your poem also- It is full of hope- well done.
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December 26, 2011 at 8:34 AM
God bless you, Brenda. I too, am new here and learning my way around. Thank you for the comment on this poem. I received the notice in my email, so it seems we are doing it right! Have a blessed day! Pokey
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