I See Alot In You

With the sunlight glinting on your cheeks and your satiny hair blowing in the breeze
The way you move, work things out, and the joy in your radiant smile makes me seize
With every step, with every move with every glance, you make me believe 
There is a lot within you that needs air to breathe, but inside it you merely keep
Just let it all release because it’s time for it to be free, to be free
The intellect present in those very exquisite eyes I can’t deny
You have much potential that I can’t possibly lie
You have to spread out your wings with your aim towards the sky
Oh, dear, you can fly, high and high
Those hardworking hands that seem never to rest
That innovative brain with numerous ideas on the nest
Keep things flowing and surely you would be the one on the rostrum desk
Just believe in yourself and believe you would be there
You would shine and glare
Just take the first step and set yourself on a new stream
Life will hug you with the things that once seemed impossible

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Date: 4/23/2024 3:17:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Date: 6/26/2022 7:23:00 AM
So heartfelt, endearing thoughts you convey, Laiba. Much enjoyed the caring voice of your poem.
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Laiba Bashir
Date: 6/27/2022 3:40:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind words, Vijay. Means alot.
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