I See a Raindrop

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This poem was actually written about 25 years ago by my son when he was in third grade or so. I always liked it.

I see a raindrop I see it fall I see a raindrop I see it splash I see a raindrop I see it become part of a puddle I see a puddle I see it float I see a puddle I see it grow I see a puddle I see it become part of a cloud I see a cloud I see it fly I see a cloud I see it move I see a cloud I see it become part of a raindrop

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/28/2025 5:47:00 PM

I like the progression in this poem, David. It flowed like rain falling from a cloud. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/28/2025 4:27:00 PM

your son was creative at a young age...thanks for sharing his poem, Sara

David Crandall
Date: 7/28/2025 4:30:00 PM

I feel both happy and sad that he could write better poetry as a little kid than I can now -lol!