David Crandall Poet Free verse

Notes About The Poem

This poem was actually written about 25 years ago by my son when he was in third grade or so.  I always liked it. 

I See a Raindrop

I see a raindrop
I see it fall

I see a raindrop
I see it splash

I see a raindrop
I see it become

part of a puddle

I see a puddle
I see it float

I see a puddle
I see it grow

I see a puddle
I see it become

part of a cloud

I see a cloud
I see it fly

I see a cloud
I see it move

I see a cloud
I see it become

part of a raindrop

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Bill Baker July 28, 2025 at 5:47 PM I like the progression in this poem, David. It flowed like rain falling from a cloud. Have a great week, my friend. Bill David Crandall July 29, 2025 at 6:29 PM Thanks Bill. It kind of reminds me of when I learned the water cycle when I was a kid.

sara Etgen-Baker July 28, 2025 at 4:27 PM your son was creative at a young age...thanks for sharing his poem, Sara David Crandall July 28, 2025 at 4:30 PM I feel both happy and sad that he could write better poetry as a little kid than I can now -lol!