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I See-The Shape of Water

I see a tear drop upon my face, then I find a tear soaked pillow. I see a dew drop, that turns into rain. I see a small stream, that is now a powerful river. I see a calm lake, after a storm it is overflowing it's banks. I see an ocean in front of me, how huge are you over the earth. I see yes-I see, God's many wonders looking back at me. Date Written: 6/13/2021

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2021 8:40:00 PM

"The shape of water", I love this.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/29/2021 8:48:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you love this water write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/14/2021 10:02:00 PM

You see many of God's wonders, and you also see how to create a gorgeous poem out of what you see.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/16/2021 1:41:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this water write. I enjoy reading your fun writes. Have a blessed day as you write away.......................

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/14/2021 4:18:00 AM

Your muse is at its best. Another great write. I have to think of something awesome to match up with this.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2021 1:01:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Did I read, "awesome to match up with this"????? So glad you like this fun water write. You always do a wonderful write. I enjoy reading them. Have fun with this one, I did. Have a blessed day as you write away.......................