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I See-The Shape of Water

I see a tear drop upon my face,                                                                                                                                                    then I find a tear soaked pillow.                                                                                                                                            I see a dew drop,                                                                                                                                                                                                   that turns into rain.                                                                                                                                                                         I see a small stream,                                                                                                       that is now a powerful river.                                                                                                                                                          I see a calm lake,                                                                                                                                                                                                       after a storm it is overflowing it's banks.                                                                                                                         I see an ocean in front of me,                                                                                                                                                          how huge are you over the earth.                                                                                                                                                                                                       I see yes-I see,                                                                                                                                                                                                   God's many wonders looking back at me.

Date Written: 6/13/2021

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M. L. Kiser Date: 6/27/2021 8:40:00 PM "The shape of water", I love this. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/29/2021 8:48:00 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you love this water write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Caren Krutsinger Date: 6/14/2021 10:02:00 PM You see many of God's wonders, and you also see how to create a gorgeous poem out of what you see. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/16/2021 1:41:00 PM Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this water write. I enjoy reading your fun writes. Have a blessed day as you write away.......................

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 6/14/2021 4:18:00 AM Your muse is at its best. Another great write. I have to think of something awesome to match up with this. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/14/2021 1:01:00 PM Thank You, for writing. Did I read, "awesome to match up with this"????? So glad you like this fun water write. You always do a wonderful write. I enjoy reading them. Have fun with this one, I did. Have a blessed day as you write away.......................