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I Saw Santa Claus

Snow had fallen, Christmas Eve morning, On every rooftop and branch adorning Burying my rural world in white, And changing this place overnight Early, I had wandered out the door, Wanting to take in the forest more I did gasp and my foot did pause, When indeed, I saw Santa Claus Standing alone there in the clearing, Attending to his reindeer, so endearing Quietly, I peered from behind a tree, Hoping that he would not spot me That day ... I did believe my eyes, For the truth is hard to disguise He was no man with a loose beard, He was not the kind that children feared Dressed up in a phony costume, Wandering around a department store room Golden jingle bells rang out their sound, When his sleigh lifted off the ground I knew that what I saw was real, Because the young at heart can feel.

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Date: 1/8/2024 3:40:00 PM
This was a darling poem. Yes, the mall santa is so dreadful. Of course when you are 5, you probably don't notice. Your poem brings back my own excitement at Christmas as a child as a once mommy of 2. What is real and imaginary? Which is more fun? Which is a dream? Questions many ask these days. To be a child with that sense of wonder again... I enjoyed this poem so much and I am delighted to have found it. Ho, ho, ho.
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Date: 12/22/2023 12:17:00 PM
Thank you for a happy childrens' poem. They'll be happy that you have verified Santa.
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Date: 12/22/2023 2:27:00 AM
Ahhh!! What a delightful it is to read your work here on soup each visit. The time spent here adds a special dimension to my day. Sara K
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Date: 12/21/2023 8:41:00 PM
This is cute, nice job, easy to read, Congrats!!! Merry Christmas, Ed
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Date: 12/21/2023 5:41:00 PM
This is so sweet. It brings a smile. Well done :)
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Date: 12/21/2023 12:47:00 PM
Hey Kelly.. Your poem beautifully captures the essence of a magical Christmas scene, transporting the reader to a world blanketed in snow and filled with the anticipation of the holiday. The vivid imagery of snow-covered rooftops and branches adorning creates a picturesque backdrop, setting the stage for the unexpected encounter with Santa Claus.
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