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I Saw, I Came, I Conquer

I have this burden in my heart
                                 It feels like a thousand tonne
                                   and it seems, I'm in a race
                                    Everybody is ready to run
                                 I have this burden in my heart
                              Oh, my Lord, How I can get it done
                                Thoughts and plans in my head
                                I wonder how I could get it done
                              To aim, to shoot, in the light of red
                                Is to put a bullet and fire the gun
                                       I think, I will go to bed
                               And wake up again to do the stunt

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Date: 11/1/2024 7:59:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/25/2016 11:21:00 PM
Hammam, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 1:31:00 PM
Hammam, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 8/5/2014 5:11:00 AM
True..!!! It creates an image in my eyes..!!!
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Hammam Hamad
Date: 8/5/2014 6:53:00 AM
Thanks, Brother.

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