I Saw a Praying Mantis

I saw a praying mantis as I went about my day The brightest green, the coolest form and I just had to say “Please tell me of your prayer” He answered in his mantis style “I pray my friends are happy and they wear the nicest smile” “I pray for those now hurting, filled with sadness in their heart I pray for lonely people who have not a place to start” “I pray for all the homeless who are living on the street I pray they find some shelter and some food that they can eat” “I pray for anybody who is in some need of prayer” I listened to him carefully, so glad that he did share Then thanked him for his answer for I now know this is true, it seems that in my mind I’m praying for the same things too
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Agustin Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 11:30 PM
Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Awtry Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 8:05 PM
I never thought to ask a praying mantis about his prayer. So glad you did! A beautiful prayer :)
Calasibetta Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Chris, WoW! Such a unique way to express your deepest sense of caring. Your personification of the Mantis, outstanding~"It seems that in my mind I'm praying for the same thing too"...priceless! Blessings, Paulette
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October 24, 2021 at 12:06 PM
So incredibly beautiful. I too pray for the same things. You're still writing such beautiful poetry:) I hope that you are well.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 8:56 AM
A lovely way to share a prayerful heart! Congratulations on POTD!
Ibeh Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 5:09 AM
Brilliant, just brilliant, Chris:-) This is a keeper! Faved.
James Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 4:54 AM
What a wonderful poem Chris and congratulations on your well derserved POTD. Fav for me. Emilia : )
Ashley Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 9:48 PM
An inspiring and beautifully prayerful poem, Chris. Congratulations for your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Simply splendid! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Merryman Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 5:59 PM
Chris, I love this poem! A well deserved choice for POTD! Congrats! Blessings, Kim M
Peck Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 4:31 PM
Back with congratulations Connie on this beautiful tribute to your husband Michael. I'm happy for you that it was chosen as POTD. Tom
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 3:49 PM
I am returning to congratulate you on POTD Chris. I am so pleased to see this wonderful poem honored with POTD. Blessings. xxoo
Nicole Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 1:06 PM
I find it remarkable that you and this "Praying Mantis" are sharing the same thoughts. :) That makes three of us. This is such a beautiful prayer. Your words lift my heart. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Brandy. I am happy you stopped by
Wolf Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 11:31 AM
I like the intimacy of this one: Just you and the mantis, with your reader(s) peeking in. Congrats on POTD, Chris! Happy weekend! :) gw
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Thanks my friend. I am happy you liked it.
Alex Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 11:15 AM
What a wonderful rhyme! With a very beautiful theme! Great Work! Congratulations!
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Thank you so very much
Hankins Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 9:23 AM
A sweet story. I always enjoyed finding a praying mantis when I was a youngster. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Thanks so very much
May Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 9:02 AM
A lovely story, Congrats on POTD
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Thanks so much Joseph
Jayasankar Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:50 AM
Hearty congrats on your potd with this beautiful write... When I was in my native place, my son spotted a praying mantis and showed it to me.... God bless... ~ Ani
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Thank you Anitha
Goldsmith Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful story/write. I love this. We can learn from your wise praying mantis. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Thank you so much Paula
La France Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:35 AM
Chris, absolutely beautiful and congratulations on your deserving POEM OF THE DAY ~peace and tranquility _Constance
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Thank you so much
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:13 AM
how odd I commented on this earlier but my comment is gone, many congrats on POTD Chris, hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:24 AM
That is odd. Thanks so much Jan.
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October 8, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Wonderful! Congratulations on poem of the day Chris, it’s well deserved… Belle
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Thank you so very much
Gentile Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 7:19 AM
I love this poem Chris, it is a perfect prayer and so worthy of its POTD honors! enjoy your day !!
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Thanks so much Mike
Roper Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 7:06 AM
I love your poem, Chris, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Thank you Eve
Strand Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 5:36 AM
Chris,a readable triplet format..the Spirit of God..works to remind us..to converse with Him...even thru a mantis""
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Thank you Brian
Sands Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 5:33 AM
Congratulations for POTD Chris :)
Green Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Thank you Heidi
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