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I would like to have magical power, then, I would wave my wand and change the world. Oh, why has hatred in our world been furled? Rules coming from an ivory tower? If I ruled, there would be no need for war, I would gather all the world leaders; and all their vast and many cheerleaders, and would sprinkle my magic dust on them. They would be a team to end the mayhem! Starvation just a scar on our road map, and only help for all the handicap. And all the borders would have an open door! People would choose the time of their own death. No pollution! We could take a big breath! _____________________________ February 23, 2017 Poetry/Canzone/I, Rule Copyright Protected, ID 17- 879-535-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Rule The World sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Date: 2/23/2017 8:57:00 PM
LOVE how you approached this one. I have a small idea what to do but it will be an endeavor. This looked effortless and you came up with a gem. Soupmail.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2017 6:22:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the love and the comment, it just came to me that the only thing that could change this world would be magic
Date: 2/23/2017 6:00:00 PM
If it will do any good Constance, I'll wish with you.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2017 6:23:00 PM
Daniel, it would take magic to change what is happening in this world
Date: 2/23/2017 9:55:00 AM
though it be so dear poet, a dream for us all..good luck
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Date: 2/25/2017 6:24:00 PM
Frederic, thanks for reading my poem, yes if it could be so

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