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I Roll My Eyes Each Time

My prom date purchased a 1963 triple black Eldorado convertible and drove up to surprise me. There was something shroud-like about it. I immediately saw the grim reaper, And he was ready to kill me under a bridge somewhere. Not only ready, glad to do it. I refused to ride in that “death trap” So we walked to the dance. It feels like a hearse, I told my date. That was fifty years ago. He still laments selling his “dream car” two days later Losing money on it because it was either me or it. I roll my eyes each time. Not caring, and not changing my mind. He is still my date, so I think he chose wisely.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/26/2019 9:22:00 PM
Love the delivery of the first sentence, so smooth. Then how it revs up and speeds towards the future outcome. Brilliant. He obviously made the wisest choice. ;) x
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/27/2019 9:08:00 AM
He is still lamenting that STUPID car.
Date: 12/26/2019 4:31:00 PM
interesting memories... do you ever wonder what happened to him?
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2019 3:41:00 AM
hahaha... i guess it was not so bad then..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/26/2019 4:51:00 PM
Not at all. He is usually in the next room watching 15 TV sets simultaneously. I married him in 1971.
Date: 12/26/2019 10:17:00 AM
Wonderful story. My date did a 360 in his bright orange van at the corner. I told him take me home. He did. I liked him, it was sad. I beat you to the coffee, and sent you treats for your morning... hugs. ... Ann
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/26/2019 10:22:00 AM
Thank you so much! I have eaten two cookies and a waffle, but coffee might be okay. I have only had one cup, and I usually have two. At the first corner? What an idiot!

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