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I Rode Shotgun

I rode shotgun with someone who look just like me Had the same skin color as far as I could steering wheel see I rode shotgun with a racist someone, who hatefully talked the same way as me Had the same gnarled speech, same gnarly hands, same ugly voice, same cursive feet like the carpal in the passenger seat I rode darkie mind shotgun with a ghost face someone who look unholy, just like me Had the same 20/20 side-by-sidearm vision, same 20/20 gauge belief As near as I could peer passenger see I once rode shotgun with a rearview mirror friend, now a gas pump-action enemy It’s hard to double barrel conceive, I went from zero-to-sixty in a heartbeat Change of attitude direction came baptismal trigger swiftly I was passenger told ... and I prayer hope, distant objects are closer than they appear to be

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Date: 11/3/2019 4:55:00 PM
Hello Freddie Robinson, so many people in one person. Have a nice evening my friend.Peace.Love. Joy. Darlene
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Date: 10/29/2019 8:39:00 PM
A House of Mirrors write. But eventually the Truth will out. Intriguing ink, Freddie. Warm wishes, Gershon
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Date: 10/27/2019 5:41:00 PM
wow....rich in imagery with depth of emotion moving that pen down the page... excellent write.... :) hugs
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Date: 10/27/2019 12:38:00 PM
Wow! Freddie, Another deep and thought provoking piece from your pen. Your ink is one of a kind. I really have missed you my dear friend. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/26/2019 4:17:00 PM
Wow... masterfully penned with a brilliant ending! This is a very thought-provoking and insightful piece. Well done!!
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Date: 10/26/2019 10:37:00 AM
Hey Freddie, my homie lol...what up dude...long time no parley...quite the intriguing write...I too rode shotgun with a 9mm pistol at my head lol...it was a bandana of course lol...thanks for the visit my friend...are you still laughing?...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/26/2019 7:56:00 AM
I have missed your poetry Freddie I am so glad I have found you again!;)
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