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I Rode a Rose

Like beautified Double-winged butterfly Took a ride beautiful There I rose And you I rode On petals of a rose. So I love The hive of your love For thence scent I rode. In cool breezy saddle On bright scented petals I rode a red rose.

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Darren White

Date: 5/8/2017 1:23:00 AM

That is a beautiful and sensual poem and I like it very much :)

Messoh Vincent
Date: 5/9/2017 1:39:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Darren n always feel free. I love your poems too.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/27/2017 10:34:00 PM

Good grace and well written, enjoyed this gem Messoh! God bless:-)

Messoh Vincent
Date: 4/30/2017 12:13:00 AM

I owe you great gratitude my dear. You are free to always read and comment on my poems.