I Rode a Rose

Like beautified
Double-winged butterfly
Took a ride beautiful

There I rose
And you I rode
On petals of a rose.

So I love
The hive of your love
For thence scent I rode.

In cool breezy saddle
On bright scented petals
I rode a red rose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May 8, 2017 at 1:23 AM
That is a beautiful and sensual poem and I like it very much :)
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May 9, 2017 at 1:39 AM
Thanks for the visit Darren n always feel free. I love your poems too.
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April 27, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Good grace and well written, enjoyed this gem Messoh! God bless:-)
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April 30, 2017 at 12:13 AM
I owe you great gratitude my dear. You are free to always read and comment on my poems.
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