I Rise

I rise
to catch the day,
Many weep to cuddle.
I rise to the super blessings- 
Those ones that parade around vivid earth,
The rooted crust and resources.
I rise to the rainbow-
Arch of colours
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gasun Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 10:47 PM
Big heartfelt congratulations on your fabulous win and stellar write my dear friend AO! I love so much and enjoyed your poem! Thanks a lot for always sharing your amazing talent! By the way, I hope you don't mind if I ask you something about one of the comments below. Are you the son of my dear friend, Therese? ;)) Looking forward for your sweet reply. Thank you so much my dear friend! love and big hugs, Leonora
Bacha Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Hi son, congrats on your win. As usual very nice. Mum
Posey Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 3:08 PM
I would be insane in minutes should I ever attempt to write in this form... My hat is off to you.... Congrats on your win... Jake
May Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 2:40 PM
congrats on a great write and win AO......I like that third line
De Burca Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Well done and congrats on your win.
A   Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 9:09 AM
a lovely rise of colors Abdulhafeez, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA
Dom Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 7:06 AM
fav.
Dom Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 6:58 AM
Brilliant! This is very inspiring.
Omara Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 2:13 AM
Nicely written Abdulhafeez. -Red
Gorelick Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 2:57 PM
You are a wonderful poet..good work. BG
Horne Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 11:40 AM
lovely write, Congrats on your wins, my friend.
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