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I, Repeat

so after dying I will live my life again here, haunting myself

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Ink Empress

Date: 11/14/2023 11:47:00 PM

Ah lol thats a comforting thought, although death can be freaky, to think we will come back haunt some fellas is reassuring and fun. Brilliant senryu dear clive! As always i enjoyed reading you.

Mark Hughes

Date: 11/14/2023 4:40:00 PM

You cracked me up with this one Clive!! I wonder how that would play with me?

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/14/2023 11:06:00 PM

Thanks Mark, I thought it would be just typical!

Tom Woody

Date: 11/14/2023 2:57:00 PM

Well, better you than me

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/14/2023 3:08:00 PM

Yep, taking one for the team, thanks for reading Tom, appreciate you stopping by

Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/14/2023 2:41:00 PM

This is quite clever (as long as you don't actually do it - that wouldn't be clever at all). Might be a senyru rather than haiku though. Great work

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/14/2023 3:06:00 PM

oh yes, just checked, senryu is more human related, haiku is nature related, so I think you're right, I'll change it. Thanks that's appreciated, and thanks for your support

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/14/2023 2:31:00 PM

oh my...what a thought! I hope that doesn't happen to any of us...am smiling as I read this creative work. I love your unique poetic voice. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/14/2023 3:03:00 PM

Thanks for reading Sara, always appreciate your comments