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I reminisce, I miss

the bliss continuum
when narrow thought
interrupts dynamic stillness 
imagery memory brought
oft in serpentine spirals
rooted in and birthed by ego
being a bubble imaginary
yet intruding rudely
owing to blockages within
still in mind body resident
onto which images anchor
seeking my attention
hoping that I indulge
thereby granting the illusions
new lease of delusional life
as dreams within dreams

I reminisce, I miss

lessening of my hearts yearning
to deepen divine connection 
by softening fickle attention
consciousness centred in void
wherein I simply do vaporise
relinquishing transient identity
melding with absolute oneness
as layer by layer veils dissolve
revealing luminescence of truth 
noumenon underlying phenomena
cognised by my spiritual eye
even as I am being so breathed
by God Himself enlivening form
whereupon in-form consciousness 
beholds in astonished wonderment 
the reassuring touch of His hand

I reminisce, I miss

20-March-2021

I reminisce I miss poetry contest
Sponsor: James Edward Lee

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Date: 4/14/2021 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 4/14/2021 9:08:00 AM
Thank you, dear Paula!
Date: 4/13/2021 9:01:00 PM
A very descriptive write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/13/2021 10:14:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! I didn’t know, better have a look at the other entries now!
Date: 3/21/2021 12:29:00 AM
I see that you do not miss anything at all my friend by these lines alone. "relinquishing transient identity melding with absolute oneness as layer by layer veils dissolve revealing luminescence of truth " The rest is showing off!
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Date: 3/21/2021 12:46:00 AM
hahaha! we are mortal, after all!

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