I Remember When It Rained

I remember when it rained
During my childhood days
That the rain would
While we were sleeping
rain through the porous roofs
Of our twin mud huts

I remember when it rained 
When I was still a young boy 
That the water would 
While my grandmother
Was trying to prepare supper
flood the fire place
and put the fire off
And we would go to sleep hungry

I remember when it rained
Back in the days 
That all our food, 
All our clothes
Would be subjected 
To coffee colored stains
Of water dripping through
The porous roofs
Of our twin mud huts

I remember when it rained
During my childhood days
That we could not sleep
We could not have food
to fill our hunger
We could not have
Dry clothes to put on 
And I did not like the rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mogotsi Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 10:17 PM
A nice recollection of past times..well written.
Brown Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 12:38 PM
Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Bojosi. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Nice memories of the childhood recollected in tranquility, Bojosi
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