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I Remember My Grand-Father

his billowing pipe smoke he laughed like santa then went to heaven i had just turned five AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on April 12, 2021

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Date: 4/16/2021 4:20:00 PM
Here's another priceless memory -- way beyond the Polaroid kind. Lovely writ, Line. (Can I stop crying now?) Grandfather Forever! ~ Gershon
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Date: 4/16/2021 7:00:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon ~ at least I remember him. More thank I can say for my younger siblings ~
Date: 4/16/2021 3:25:00 AM
I can feel the love and the pain. I know you will always remember many of his good attributes and character. Enjoyed reading. Sara
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Date: 4/16/2021 6:47:00 AM
Thanks, Sara ~
Date: 4/14/2021 10:03:00 PM
I can smell the smoke and hear the laughter. I'm sure you could even after he left you. Great poem.
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Date: 4/15/2021 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy ~
Date: 4/12/2021 12:31:00 PM
too bad you didn't get more time with him, but at least you have this sweet memory, line...
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Date: 4/12/2021 11:21:00 AM
Such a wonderful memory you have, Line:-) I barely even remember my 5th birthday, lol! Lovely poem.
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Date: 4/12/2021 7:48:00 AM
Ah, Line, this is such a sweet little tribute to a man you loved very much as a child. Nice work.
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Date: 4/12/2021 9:18:00 AM
so sad not to get to know your grandparents ~

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