I Remember

I remember a dress the color of sunflowers gently swaying to An enchanted melody; A floppy hat the color of fresh Fallen snow, and a small fragile hand cradling a little Black missal being taken to Sunday Mass.

I remember longing to be the priest hearing her fervent Confession and holding her meager sins in my ardent
Arms, while assigning only two Hail Mary's to absolve her Perceived offenses. 

I remember her casual glance touching my spirit and Turning my cold, cruel heart into an amber, while a Sweet Feeling of contentment, swept over me like the Warm waves of the Caribbean.

I remember her slim waist and her hips that promised
Many offsprings, while her legs in sheer stockings Begged To be released from their confinement, so they Could Tenderly embrace my waist.

I remember she looked at me her, eyes full of hope and Dreams, while I in my Sunday best, held her hand  as I Placed a ring on her finger and hearing "I do."
Oh God how I remember.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/21/2017 12:27:00 AM
Wow I so love marrieds poems as opposed to the fickle unstable premarital lovers love stories. U phrased it here so awesomely, marvellous and sentimental. Reminiscing the nuptial and the start of lasting love so uniquely and beautiful. Kudos. Nice to meet your poems.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 12/21/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thank you for your comments Zaynap. I appreciate your response.
Date: 12/20/2017 6:55:00 PM
Lovely Carlos...A lucky girl you have...All the best to both of you
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Date: 12/20/2017 8:45:00 PM
I'm still crazy about her and after 52 years of marriage, she feels the same about me. Thanks for your comments.
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