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Someone once saying to me I always wished to meet some like you To you one writes poetry from the heart and soul opening up from my very being Looking into the sky spirit of a kestrel dancing on warm waves of air brushing deep Just sharing writing sitting on the riverbank alone with my old pal buster my dog listening to the mountain stream rumbling past I see with you love a great vision love inside deep you told me tears falling joy I had a beautiful soul or is that not what you want confused I am our friendship Then you said I had a heart to match and once said It just totally blew me away into heaven feels I am still not good enough I give you all inside off me Love you are so very special to sail away in heartbeats off thoughts amazing each moment spent thinking about you Into the clouds of silver lining treasure dream opening in front off you Holding most precious jewels first glance crowning you this ocean's queen Holy grail such a gem lights up smiles beaming warm vision painting beauty The sparkle in those beautiful mirrors dazzling stars just shone a whole new world to me Their is such a thing as love I feel it complete at the very first sight instantly I found it with you

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Date: 10/24/2014 11:57:00 AM
To know that someone, somewhere has been touched by your words... that is all the poet really asks for. Sorry to say you still don't feel "good enough" however that is a great humble mindset to have :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 12:40:00 PM
yeah timothy i wish sometimes you see the true face of those who really care wonderful comment bless you pal
Date: 10/3/2014 4:40:00 PM
Sometimes, we do receive comments that just touch our hearts, and those will always be remembered.... This is a lovely write, Liam. The imagery is so vivid and beautiful. Very nicely done!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 5:35:00 PM
kelly thank you deeply dear friend truly wonderful comment touching bless you pal
Date: 10/2/2014 10:49:00 AM
Its always good to remember....picturesque in every way, Liam. Lovely...
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 10:56:00 AM
thank you kindly eileen truly wonderful comment dear friend bless you deeply appreciated
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 10:53:00 AM
thank you k
Date: 10/2/2014 9:23:00 AM
beautiful. love the lines with the clouds and heartbeats of thoughts.. what a sweet experience it exudes.. :) Its like the thoughts are same with the heartbeats.. :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 9:31:00 AM
ah olive so very sweet of you thank you kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/2/2014 9:25:00 AM
love your free verse poems.. :) i have read allot who does this so beautifully and I consider you among my list.... :)
Date: 10/2/2014 8:40:00 AM
As Dave said,Completely lovely Liam.I can visualize the mountain and hear the sound of water gushing,a dog barking,and a poet writing about love.I can visualize a face of a beautiful woman emerging out of the ocean,She wears a golden tiara.Beautiful.Adding it to my favs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 9:03:00 AM
it has a blinding effect love to the soul were peace is always found charmaine dear friend thank you it just brought teardrops i wrote this for someone special heartfelt appreciated your a pal bless you

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