Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

I Remember

Someone once saying to me
I always wished to meet some like you
To you one writes poetry from the heart and soul
opening up from my very being 
Looking into the sky spirit of a kestrel dancing
on warm waves of air brushing deep
Just sharing writing sitting on the riverbank 
alone with my old pal buster my dog
listening to the mountain stream rumbling past
I see with you love a great vision 
love inside deep you told me
tears falling joy I had a beautiful soul
or is that not what you want 
confused I am our friendship
Then you said I had a heart to match and once said 
It just totally blew me away into heaven
feels  I am still not good enough 
I give you all inside off me
Love you are so very special 
to sail away in heartbeats off thoughts 
amazing each moment spent thinking about you
Into the clouds of silver lining treasure dream
opening in front off you
Holding most precious jewels first glance
crowning you this ocean's queen
Holy grail such a gem lights up smiles
beaming warm vision painting beauty
The sparkle in those beautiful mirrors 
dazzling stars just shone a whole new world to me 
Their is such a thing as love I feel it complete
at the very first sight instantly
I found it with you

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Timothy Hicks October 24, 2014 at 11:57 AM To know that someone, somewhere has been touched by your words... that is all the poet really asks for. Sorry to say you still don't feel "good enough" however that is a great humble mindset to have :) Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 12:40 PM yeah timothy i wish sometimes you see the true face of those who really care wonderful comment bless you pal

Kelly Deschler October 3, 2014 at 4:40 PM Sometimes, we do receive comments that just touch our hearts, and those will always be remembered.... This is a lovely write, Liam. The imagery is so vivid and beautiful. Very nicely done! Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 5:35 PM kelly thank you deeply dear friend truly wonderful comment touching bless you pal

Eileen Manassian October 2, 2014 at 10:49 AM Its always good to remember....picturesque in every way, Liam. Lovely... Liam Mcdaid October 2, 2014 at 10:56 AM thank you kindly eileen truly wonderful comment dear friend bless you deeply appreciated Liam Mcdaid October 2, 2014 at 10:53 AM thank you k

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 2, 2014 at 9:23 AM beautiful. love the lines with the clouds and heartbeats of thoughts.. what a sweet experience it exudes.. :) Its like the thoughts are same with the heartbeats.. :) Liam Mcdaid October 2, 2014 at 9:31 AM ah olive so very sweet of you thank you kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 2, 2014 at 9:25 AM love your free verse poems.. :) i have read allot who does this so beautifully and I consider you among my list.... :)

Charmaine Chircop October 2, 2014 at 8:40 AM As Dave said,Completely lovely Liam.I can visualize the mountain and hear the sound of water gushing,a dog barking,and a poet writing about love.I can visualize a face of a beautiful woman emerging out of the ocean,She wears a golden tiara.Beautiful.Adding it to my favs Liam Mcdaid October 2, 2014 at 9:03 AM it has a blinding effect love to the soul were peace is always found charmaine dear friend thank you it just brought teardrops i wrote this for someone special heartfelt appreciated your a pal bless you