I Remember

I remember the first day
I saw her;
her lips glittering
in the summer sun,
and smile as beautiful
as a shooting star

She looked like a mermaid
that was pretending
to be a human

I still remember.......
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March 26, 2013 at 9:05 PM
Dear Teddy, Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM " I Remember " in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. Beautiful Living Memory.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
Kimathi Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 8:29 AM
Thanks Harry! I really appreciate it! ;)
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March 19, 2013 at 10:27 PM
Hi Teddy, your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 7:22 AM
Thanks Linda! ;)
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