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I Reach Towards Her Hand

She walks along the shores of my mind. Her scent fills me with anticipation. All of the night clouds are silver lined. She is far beyond any expectation! I reach out to take her hand in mine. Her scent fills me with anticipation. I look to the heavens for a sign. Praying she is only meant for me. I reach out to take her hand in mine. She looks towards me I feel free. Together to ecstasy we will fly. Praying she is only meant for me. Wrapped in a love that lifts me high. She is proof that dreams come true. Together to ecstasy we will fly. There was a time when I was blue. She is proof that dreams come true. She walks along the shores of my mind. All the night clouds are silver lined. Nette's Softly Sensual Contest

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Date: 12/3/2014 8:27:00 AM
:)Back go see some of your really lovely work, Richard. This being a case in point. The terzanelle...lovely. Hope all is well.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2014 8:06:00 AM
I hadn't written one in a while, I guess it was time.
Date: 9/12/2013 5:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this dream of a poem....I'm so proud of your work....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/12/2013 7:02:00 AM
Thanks again Eileen.
Date: 9/3/2013 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Sara
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Date: 9/3/2013 8:22:00 AM
Walking along the shores of memory she has left a deep high tide watermark indebibly there..Great winning work..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 9/2/2013 10:09:00 PM
This is beautiful Richard. Many warm congrats for the win.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2013 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Tahera.
Date: 9/2/2013 9:21:00 PM
well done...Linda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2013 6:59:00 AM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 9/2/2013 7:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2013 6:59:00 AM
Thanks Morgan
Date: 9/1/2013 1:38:00 PM
Richard, a nice winning poem... Love ~ SKAT ~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2013 6:21:00 PM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 9/1/2013 12:16:00 PM
I am humbled to compete with such a fine poet... congratulations on your win and inspirational writes :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2013 6:24:00 PM
Thanks Karen! You are kind.
Date: 9/1/2013 6:51:00 AM
- This became a winning poem, it was really deserved. - Soft and romantic, Richard! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/1/2013 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise,
Date: 8/26/2013 6:52:00 PM
Richard, you are an amazingly prolific writer, an inspiration to all those who hope to emulate your talent. Allan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/1/2013 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Allan
Date: 8/26/2013 7:56:00 AM
a soft whisper this is..So nice to read your romantic side- Charma
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2013 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Charmain.
Date: 8/25/2013 10:04:00 PM
Hi Richard...I hope this goes far...All the way to the top!!! Soup mail...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 11:32:00 PM
Thanks Eileen
Date: 8/25/2013 3:21:00 PM
So dreamy and tender, beautifully penned. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 11:32:00 PM
Thanks Cecilia
Date: 8/24/2013 5:57:00 PM
Utterly charming Richard a superb terzanelle Kudos dear poet fav'ing it
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/24/2013 7:06:00 PM
I am honored Shadow!
Date: 8/24/2013 6:19:00 AM
SIGHhhhhhhh. So romantic.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/24/2013 7:00:00 AM
Thanks Monterey
Date: 8/23/2013 9:34:00 PM
A dream. But who's counting.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/24/2013 1:55:00 AM
Thanks John
Date: 8/23/2013 8:59:00 PM
Oh how softly sensual this came out. The style gives it such poetic grace. It fits the theme perfectly :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/24/2013 1:54:00 AM
Thanks Karen
Date: 8/23/2013 9:42:00 AM
Damn, yes, Richard!!! That last line is absolutely vital & important. Wonderful job, per usual!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/23/2013 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Drake
Date: 8/23/2013 9:07:00 AM
Good morning, Richard. :) Nice to read this from you. A beautiful Terzanelle... :) Very moving....Romantic...Sweet. Please...would you check the last line of the third stanza? I think you meant her instead of he.... ;) Have a good day!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/24/2013 4:06:00 PM
Anything to make my mentor look good! ;) AS IF...you need that????
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/23/2013 9:52:00 AM
Good morning Eileen, thanks for catching my typo.

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