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My afghan man with arms like an orangutan who likes to kiss me while we stand He says He loves to look into your eyes as he kisses you She says You are my muse You silly goose And I love you mightily and tell you nightly He is asleep now, so i will improvise his response He says Oh Susie Q you are the goose I may serve you with butter Until I hear you utter I do Butter she says, does another food group come along  Its wrong just to butter a girl up you know You toss in something of a pairing to make it last long He says For you dear its up all night it's quite the sight I pet it or bat it but your voice makes it gravid Oh dear darling you have ruined my goofy poem You darn Scottish tall gnome I love you forever, now get to my home!!   I put orangutan into a poem. I need an award.  - For Alan 10/23/2003 11:53PM Artimus (C) Susan Manley It started as a text chat with him

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Date: 10/25/2023 11:56:00 AM
A very clever poem and one that made smile.. you have a wonderful imagination and that shows here..you did very well to get orangutan in your poem..
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Susan Manley
Date: 10/25/2023 3:16:00 PM
Thanks, Chemo brain is something. I am wiped out today
Date: 10/24/2023 2:28:00 PM
have to say, this poem was a clever one, Susan. It made me smile...thanks for your words, Sara
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Susan Manley
Date: 10/25/2023 3:17:00 PM
I was making us laugh, and it still makes me laugh.

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