I Promised Not To Call

If my leaving suits you best
    then I'll go like all the rest
        and never question why we ever tried at all.
But when you told me not to stay
    you were crying as you turned away
        so I'll honor your last wish... and promise not to call.

You will not sleep well tonight
    as you'll wake up to the sight
        of my jacket gone and boots not in the hall.
So you'll find yourself alone
    and when you go to check your phone,
        they'll be no message because...I promised not to call.

          I'm a miserable sight as I lie here tonight
          With a hand grasping the phone.
          But I'm losing the fight to do what is right
          As I try to leave you alone.

You will tremble at the thought
    about the misery you have bought
        and the regret that leaves a person feeling small.
So when you want to hold my hand
    you'll have to change your plans
        and come and find me because... I promised not to call.

Should you cast away your doubt
    and strive to freely seek me out,
        you'll find this Cowboy at the ready standing tall.
Until then my will is weak
    and I would give anything just to speak
        but I gave my word so... I promise not to call.

          I'm a miserable sight as I lie here tonight
          With a hand grasping the phone.
          But I'm losing the fight to do what is right
          As I try to leave you alone.

                                The End

*For those who might be interested. I will be posting my cartoon 'Bob's your Uncle' on my homepage. A new one will appear every second day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/15/2019 8:35:00 PM
Enjoyed the write David. Love the way you express yourself! Quite unique and so you. Panagiota
Login to Reply
Date: 5/24/2019 10:11:00 AM
Promised her not to call but it seems you both want to speak to one another, go on call her, you'll both be glad. A really beautiful write - think it's awesome! Hugs, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/18/2019 12:34:00 PM
I want to cry for you, but I promised not to, and hope you don't keep your promise not to call.
Login to Reply
Mchattie Avatar
David Mchattie
Date: 5/18/2019 3:02:00 PM
I think a smart man would call because you never know. Have a great day.
Date: 5/17/2019 11:58:00 PM
Ah so true to stand by your word. I also think David that one has to look from the woman's point of view, after all she asked him not to call.
Login to Reply
Mchattie Avatar
David Mchattie
Date: 5/18/2019 3:01:00 PM
Women are indeed the greatest of all mysteries. As someone once said, 'There are two ways to understand a women and nether of them work.'
Date: 5/17/2019 8:27:00 PM
An honorable man for sure! It is refreshing to see this! So REFRESHING! It sounds like you possibly might have a bit of experience with this, David. If not, your imagination is stupendous!
Login to Reply
Mchattie Avatar
David Mchattie
Date: 5/18/2019 2:59:00 PM
It took me a while to learn when a girl wants to break up she doesn't always mean it. Have a great day my friend.
Date: 5/17/2019 2:07:00 PM
Promises, promises! Nice refrain, seriously. Very rhythmical...And now for a silly thought: 'Promise' inside out is 'miss Prom,' which is what just might happen if one 'promises not to call!' ~ Miss/Mr. Prom in Chicago (so gender-confused today...LOL).
Login to Reply
Mchattie Avatar
David Mchattie
Date: 5/18/2019 2:58:00 PM
These are interesting times we live in my friend.
Date: 5/17/2019 11:32:00 AM
So good! Excellent piece David!
Login to Reply
Mchattie Avatar
David Mchattie
Date: 5/18/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Maureen.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter