I Pray

Solace and Such Stance
Souls of Lovers Never Thrive....
But What a Sweet Treat



For the Praying Mantis Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations Molly on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Praying Mantis Haiku's". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations, MOlly! Luv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Lost at love, but cherished as food. That the way love goes. Congratulations, dear Molly. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 9:44 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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July 8, 2010 at 9:21 PM
The last line has me smilling. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Keep on writing. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 8:32 PM
Congrats Molly on your winning poem in the Mantis contest.. way to go ..enjoy.. with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Very clever with subtle humor, Molly. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Conway Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 8:34 PM
I love the twist at the end-Darn those pesky females eating the males!~Tirzah~
Mitchell Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Lol! This made me laugh! I didn't expect the last line : ).... Good luck in the contest!
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