Notes About The Poem

I, Poet

I see
and I bruise...
paper with pen.
I lay bare my naked
essence.


Poetry Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by: charles messina 
Checked at www.howmanysyllables.com
Date: 04/22/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Allison Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 4:55 PM
love those first three lines especially Edward, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 5:34 PM
Thank you so much, Jan:-)
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 1:52 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :-) Most appreciated.
Messina Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 6:17 AM
Edward, fantastic cingku my friend. Unfortunately you were supposed to use one of my lines from my poem as your title. Congrats on your placement. Charlie
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Oops, sorry about that, Charlie!:-) I appreciate you placing me anyway! Most obliged.
Faulkner Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 3:25 PM
The pen is mightier, they say - it is a brave thing to offer your talent like this - very stirring entry for the contest!
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 5:03 PM
Thank you so much. Michelle:-)
Warrior Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Great entry my friend...stay safe...^WW^ :o)
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 5:02 PM
Thank you, WW!:-) You stay safe as well, bud.
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