I Paid the Toll

My arms open wide, I held you close to me
But nobody is there just a warm breath 
You promised love together, we would see

Aroma wafts, filled with the stench of death
I never promised you on a light whim
But nobody is there just a warm breath

You took from me my heart, that was grim
My love was to give for all of my life
I never promised you on a light whim

Fate in the hand of a cold man with a knife
Taking all I had to give, took a toll 
My love was to give for all of my life

Never again will I give heart and soul
You took it all from me, right at the start
Taking all I had to give, took a toll

You stole the sausage roll, it broke my heart
My arms open wide, I held you close to me
You took it all from me, right at the start
You promised love together, we would see

© ~GG~ 12/12/2012


Heart stops beating
Knife cuts through last roll...
Why did I let you in?

© ~GG~ 12/12/2012

For any that know me I don’t like candy but woe to anyone that take my sausage roll. 
Entry for Richards Terzanelle and Questionku chaser Contest
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A  Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 11:49 AM
Mandy, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
Williams Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 11:16 AM
Mandy congrats on your win, I like the humour in this...David
Liwayway Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 9:08 AM
Awesome write friend Mandy :) Congratulations on your win!! cheers!
Horsman Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 3:39 AM
congrats to you Mandy,, this is truly a wonderful poem...love to share a sausage roll with you....
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 4:00 AM
good idea ,, thanks harry xx
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 1:47 AM
Well done Mandy......Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 3:59 AM
Thanks luv hugs xx
Tsiluma Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 1:22 AM
Very well penned Mandy! And lots of fun to read! Congrats on your win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 3:59 AM
Thanks Vicky luv xx
A   Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Mandy.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 3:58 AM
Thanks Pd xx
Guzzi Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Yikes was that a metaphor? LOL the sausage? You are such a joker..Congrads on your win Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 3:58 AM
ha ha Debbie , no not a metaphor lol xx
Lamoureux Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 7:03 PM
This was a lot of fun, congratulations.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 3:57 AM
Thanks Richard xx
Fraser Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 3:32 AM
I miss sausage rolls, anyways Mandy, i enjoyed this write, have a wonderful day, blessings, Carl
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 3:49 AM
Why do oyu miss them Carl go out and get one . I haven't had one in weeks though lol xx
May Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 1:40 PM
nicely penned Mandy.... thanks for stopping by....best of luck in the contest...love
Horsman Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 9:15 AM
you had me going again, i was totally absorbed in this wonderful poem, when i had to stop, and have a cup of coffee, and someone kindly gave me a sauage roll, which i just loved...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 9:44 AM
Glad about that harry ,nothing like a sausage roll my friend xx
West Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 5:37 PM
Hi Mandy, a really great piece you penned here. Rollo
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 8:55 PM
Thanks Rollo xx
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December 12, 2012 at 4:20 PM
Hey Mandy, first I must say I always enjoy your work. You are an original Btw I make a killer sausage bread!! Hugs from Santa Michael
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December 12, 2012 at 8:56 PM
sounds interesting Michael and thanks for the compliment xx
Horne Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 3:27 PM
LOL, got a huge chuckle out of the last line
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Thanks Jack that is my intention so I am happy it worked xx
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December 12, 2012 at 12:54 PM
Another fantastic poem from your"gifted pen", Mandy! I love your wonderful sense of humor demonstrated in the last line of the last stanza!! Awesome....a good twist to break the sad tone! Love it. Thanks for the congrats..I appreciate you reading my poem and your kind comments. Love, Annalise
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 1:12 PM
I try not to be sad but i love to set the illusion so thank you for your lovely comment xx
Gasun Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 11:23 AM
An excellent poem and form my dear friend Mandy! I extremely enjoyed reading it! I hope I can try to compose also a poem with this form if I've sufficient time. I love it and the smiles you gave through this superbly wonderful write! Million thanks! My belated congratulations on all your wins too and your wonderful blogs as well which cheer me up! More power and blessings always! love and biggest hugs to you, Leonora
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December 12, 2012 at 1:13 PM
Oh gosh thank you Leo love, how are you ? much appreciate the lovely comment sweetheart xx
Williams Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 9:19 AM
remind me not to show you my sausage roll!!!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 9:57 AM
Hey you promised you would last time lol xx
Nair Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 8:53 AM
Well done, Mandy, it is a good one. The form looks quite tough but you came up with one so quickly!! soupmail!! Jag
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December 12, 2012 at 9:56 AM
Thanks for the help there Jag, much appreciated xx
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