Akkina Downing Poet Free verse

I Owe You a Million of Thanks

You found me a broken soul
You didn’t need to know my past 
You just lifted me and carried me away
Your gentle touch assured me I was safe
Your soothing voice was most comforting 
Your tenderness was the validation of the     
    possibility I have a chance to make it

I couldn’t bring myself to look into your eyes
I was too afraid to open my eyes
In my confusion thoughts you were an Angel 
Perhaps you’re here to take me up to Heaven
Away from the pain and ugliness that’s breaking me down to pieces
And in my broken heart I felt your spark of hope 

You didn’t need to ask me for anything
Seeing and understanding who I was 
You went about your way and cared for me
You healed me 
You filled me with hope
You gave me a validation there’s much to live for

Now I can look into your eyes
My heart embraces you 
I’m smiling for you 
And 
I suppose I owe you a million of thanks 



Akkina
8/8/23


POTD 8/10/23

Hello poets, been a bit.

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Maria Williams September 25, 2023 at 10:58 PM Akinna, my lovely friend, how wonderful to connect again and through this beautiful poem of tenderness, love and hope. How fitting that it should win POTD, sorry I missed it before, but please accept my belated congratulations. Love and Hugs

Andrea Dietrich September 11, 2023 at 9:03 PM I see this got POTD? Big congrats

Panagiota Romios September 1, 2023 at 7:56 PM Late on the Congratulations! Is hit Gresham fun to gey a POTD? I think you emote very well through your poetry, Be proud of your writing Psanagiota xx Akkina Downing September 1, 2023 at 8:03 PM Thank you Pangie : )

I Am Anaya August 31, 2023 at 6:21 PM Akkina, even though I haven't known you for too long, I think you are a sweet and gentle poetess, I am so thrilled that you have found solace in someone special. Your smile is enough for that individual I'm sure of it! A zillion thanks for sharing a well-deserved POTD, Congratulations! I Am Anaya Akkina Downing September 1, 2023 at 8:03 PM Anaya, thank you so very much for this most beautiful comment. You just made my heart smile a big one :)

Paula Goldsmith August 29, 2023 at 12:26 PM What a powerful write. Heaven does send angels to help us. Thank You, are 2 very important words that many do not use. I enjoyed reading this story. Have a great day............. Akkina Downing August 30, 2023 at 6:57 PM Paula, your feedback made me smile. Thank you so much :)

Curie Stark August 25, 2023 at 3:43 AM Such a touching piece of poetry Akkina Downing August 28, 2023 at 6:25 PM Thank you again :)

Hiya Sharma August 24, 2023 at 5:17 AM A lovely piece that truly reflects your admiration towards the loved one, definitely describing that an angel has blessed your life.. I adore everything about this piece, so heartwarming and magical! - Hiya :) Akkina Downing August 24, 2023 at 1:35 PM Thank you so much, Hiya :)

Curie Stark August 23, 2023 at 11:23 PM Beautiful piece of poetry embellished with intricate emotions Akkina Downing August 24, 2023 at 1:35 PM Thank you so much, Curie :)

Lady Labyrinth August 22, 2023 at 9:27 PM Unconditional love. Beautiful. xx Akkina Downing August 24, 2023 at 1:34 PM Thank you so much, dear friend :)

Silent One August 18, 2023 at 3:09 PM This must be dedicated to someone special...s lovely poem that shows how much you appreciate someone .. we all need someone to save us and be there...love this Akkina Downing August 19, 2023 at 1:17 PM Thank you so much, S.O :)

Christina Bowring August 18, 2023 at 11:18 AM This is such a beautiful, tender poem Akkina. I really enjoyed it especially the last stanza. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes to you. Akkina Downing August 19, 2023 at 1:13 PM Thank you so much, Christina :)

Victor Buhagiar August 16, 2023 at 12:47 AM Lovely write Akkina. May angels always surround you. Congrats for the POTD. Akkina Downing August 16, 2023 at 6:22 AM Thank you so much, Vic :)

Ink Empress August 15, 2023 at 8:30 PM Such soul stirring lines articulates so beautifully. I absolutely love the flow and descriptive words that convey so many emotions. Ah everyone deserves such love, one who can heal and feel you. Love this Akkina Downing August 15, 2023 at 8:36 PM Thank you so much, Ink Empress. I do love your name too :)

The Situation August 15, 2023 at 6:09 PM The right way to make a relationship. To return what was given. Akkina Downing August 15, 2023 at 7:56 PM Thank you so much, T S :)

Yann Rolland August 15, 2023 at 6:04 PM a so cute tribute, this person is remarkable, thanks for sharing Akkina Downing August 15, 2023 at 7:55 PM Thank you so much, yann :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 15, 2023 at 10:29 AM A wonderful tribute, Akkina. Congratulations on your POTD honors. Blessings Akkina Downing August 15, 2023 at 7:55 PM Thank you so much, Evelyn :)

Paul Callus August 15, 2023 at 4:25 AM Hi Akkina! Yes, it's been a bit, but you make up for it with this beautiful, positive poem which you have on offer. Life can be cruel, but we must never throw in the towel. Congrats on p.o.t.d. Best regards // paul Akkina Downing August 15, 2023 at 7:55 PM Thank you so much, Paul. All my best to you too :)

Sara Kendrick August 15, 2023 at 1:51 AM Very expressive and emotive lines penned in this one. This one has me asking millions of questions about you and your life so a great work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Akkina Downing August 15, 2023 at 7:54 PM Thank you so much, Sara :)

Paige Hind August 13, 2023 at 1:04 PM A beautiful tribute to your loved one! Akkina Downing August 14, 2023 at 3:47 PM Thank you, Paige :)

Joanna Daniel August 13, 2023 at 3:34 AM Beautiful poem, Akkina, congratulations on pots:) Akkina Downing August 14, 2023 at 3:47 PM Thank you so much, Joanna :)

Richard Lamoureux August 12, 2023 at 5:03 PM Lovely! also congratulations on POTD. Akkina Downing August 14, 2023 at 8:36 PM Thank you Richard :)

Jerry Brotherton August 12, 2023 at 7:54 AM Congratulations on the POTD honor, Akkina. This is such a hard-hitting poem. Masterfully crafted. Akkina Downing August 12, 2023 at 11:14 AM Thank you so much, Jerry

Nancy Kaufman August 12, 2023 at 5:56 AM Congratulations Akkina on this sweet and touching POTD. Akkina Downing August 12, 2023 at 11:14 AM Thank you so much, Nancy

Deb M August 11, 2023 at 8:52 PM Awww your poem is so lovely Akkina ….a poem of pure love and appreciation! Congratulations….A well deserved POTD…..Debx

Regina Mcintosh August 11, 2023 at 10:50 AM Lovely write. Congrats on POTD. God bless you with many more, love, Gina Akkina Downing August 11, 2023 at 5:06 PM Thank you so much, Regina :)

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