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I Owe You a Million of Thanks

You found me a broken soul
You didn’t need to know my past 
You just lifted me and carried me away
Your gentle touch assured me I was safe
Your soothing voice was most comforting 
Your tenderness was the validation of the     
    possibility I have a chance to make it

I couldn’t bring myself to look into your eyes
I was too afraid to open my eyes
In my confusion thoughts you were an Angel 
Perhaps you’re here to take me up to Heaven
Away from the pain and ugliness that’s breaking me down to pieces
And in my broken heart I felt your spark of hope 

You didn’t need to ask me for anything
Seeing and understanding who I was 
You went about your way and cared for me
You healed me 
You filled me with hope
You gave me a validation there’s much to live for

Now I can look into your eyes
My heart embraces you 
I’m smiling for you 
And 
I suppose I owe you a million of thanks 



Akkina
8/8/23


POTD 8/10/23

Hello poets, been a bit.

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Maria Williams Date: 9/25/2023 10:58:00 PM Akinna, my lovely friend, how wonderful to connect again and through this beautiful poem of tenderness, love and hope. How fitting that it should win POTD, sorry I missed it before, but please accept my belated congratulations. Love and Hugs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/11/2023 9:03:00 PM I see this got POTD? Big congrats Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/1/2023 7:56:00 PM Late on the Congratulations! Is hit Gresham fun to gey a POTD? I think you emote very well through your poetry, Be proud of your writing Psanagiota xx Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 9/1/2023 8:03:00 PM Thank you Pangie : )

I Am Anaya Date: 8/31/2023 6:21:00 PM Akkina, even though I haven't known you for too long, I think you are a sweet and gentle poetess, I am so thrilled that you have found solace in someone special. Your smile is enough for that individual I'm sure of it! A zillion thanks for sharing a well-deserved POTD, Congratulations! I Am Anaya Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 9/1/2023 8:03:00 PM Anaya, thank you so very much for this most beautiful comment. You just made my heart smile a big one :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/29/2023 12:26:00 PM What a powerful write. Heaven does send angels to help us. Thank You, are 2 very important words that many do not use. I enjoyed reading this story. Have a great day............. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/30/2023 6:57:00 PM Paula, your feedback made me smile. Thank you so much :)

Curie Stark Date: 8/25/2023 3:43:00 AM Such a touching piece of poetry Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/28/2023 6:25:00 PM Thank you again :)

Hiya Sharma Date: 8/24/2023 5:17:00 AM A lovely piece that truly reflects your admiration towards the loved one, definitely describing that an angel has blessed your life.. I adore everything about this piece, so heartwarming and magical! - Hiya :) Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/24/2023 1:35:00 PM Thank you so much, Hiya :)

Curie Stark Date: 8/23/2023 11:23:00 PM Beautiful piece of poetry embellished with intricate emotions Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/24/2023 1:35:00 PM Thank you so much, Curie :)

Lady Labyrinth Date: 8/22/2023 9:27:00 PM Unconditional love. Beautiful. xx Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/24/2023 1:34:00 PM Thank you so much, dear friend :)

Silent One Date: 8/18/2023 3:09:00 PM This must be dedicated to someone special...s lovely poem that shows how much you appreciate someone .. we all need someone to save us and be there...love this Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/19/2023 1:17:00 PM Thank you so much, S.O :)

Christina Bowring Date: 8/18/2023 11:18:00 AM This is such a beautiful, tender poem Akkina. I really enjoyed it especially the last stanza. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes to you. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/19/2023 1:13:00 PM Thank you so much, Christina :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/16/2023 12:47:00 AM Lovely write Akkina. May angels always surround you. Congrats for the POTD. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/16/2023 6:22:00 AM Thank you so much, Vic :)

Ink Empress Date: 8/15/2023 8:30:00 PM Such soul stirring lines articulates so beautifully. I absolutely love the flow and descriptive words that convey so many emotions. Ah everyone deserves such love, one who can heal and feel you. Love this Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/15/2023 8:36:00 PM Thank you so much, Ink Empress. I do love your name too :)

The Situation Date: 8/15/2023 6:09:00 PM The right way to make a relationship. To return what was given. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/15/2023 7:56:00 PM Thank you so much, T S :)

Yann Rolland Date: 8/15/2023 6:04:00 PM a so cute tribute, this person is remarkable, thanks for sharing Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/15/2023 7:55:00 PM Thank you so much, yann :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/15/2023 10:29:00 AM A wonderful tribute, Akkina. Congratulations on your POTD honors. Blessings Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/15/2023 7:55:00 PM Thank you so much, Evelyn :)

Paul Callus Date: 8/15/2023 4:25:00 AM Hi Akkina! Yes, it's been a bit, but you make up for it with this beautiful, positive poem which you have on offer. Life can be cruel, but we must never throw in the towel. Congrats on p.o.t.d. Best regards // paul Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/15/2023 7:55:00 PM Thank you so much, Paul. All my best to you too :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/15/2023 1:51:00 AM Very expressive and emotive lines penned in this one. This one has me asking millions of questions about you and your life so a great work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/15/2023 7:54:00 PM Thank you so much, Sara :)

Paige Hind Date: 8/13/2023 1:04:00 PM A beautiful tribute to your loved one! Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/14/2023 3:47:00 PM Thank you, Paige :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/13/2023 3:34:00 AM Beautiful poem, Akkina, congratulations on pots:) Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/14/2023 3:47:00 PM Thank you so much, Joanna :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/12/2023 5:03:00 PM Lovely! also congratulations on POTD. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/14/2023 8:36:00 PM Thank you Richard :)

Jerry Brotherton Date: 8/12/2023 7:54:00 AM Congratulations on the POTD honor, Akkina. This is such a hard-hitting poem. Masterfully crafted. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/12/2023 11:14:00 AM Thank you so much, Jerry

Nancy Kaufman Date: 8/12/2023 5:56:00 AM Congratulations Akkina on this sweet and touching POTD. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/12/2023 11:14:00 AM Thank you so much, Nancy

Deb M Date: 8/11/2023 8:52:00 PM Awww your poem is so lovely Akkina ….a poem of pure love and appreciation! Congratulations….A well deserved POTD…..Debx Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 8/11/2023 10:50:00 AM Lovely write. Congrats on POTD. God bless you with many more, love, Gina Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/11/2023 5:06:00 PM Thank you so much, Regina :)

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