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I Never Knew Love Until I Knew You

FROM HEART TO PAPER UNEDITED For every tear you shed from hurt physical or emotional For every tear you shed from shame rightly or wrongly My loves my heart sheds a beat I never knew love Until I knew you I love you both from my tippy toes to the peak of my silver threads Don't hurt my dears But when you do I will hold you tight Encase your fears Minimize the pain And when my heart bleeds or slightly feels a crack It's because my daughters your lives before mine.
I love you so much girls...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chakrabarty Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 4:38 AM
Touched my heart, an immense feeling ))):: rajat
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 7:10 PM
What loving words you have written. I am sure your daughters will treasure tem. Thank you for your many kind comments. Love, Joyce
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:34 PM
thank you Joyce. I love your poetry.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 1:22 PM
Love in our hearts make all of us poets but when the love that inspires us is that of our children then we become divine poets! Intensely touching and tender poem my friend, Maurice! Beautiful beyond words!
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:33 PM
love your comments. you are so right.
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:06 PM
So very sweet. Do your dear daughters realize you are becoming such an amazing poet now? As well as director!! (oops, sorry I didn't mention directors in my prayer poem ; I should have said ALL those connected with the entertainment industry. It's my favorite of all the industries.
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:31 PM
I saw that you use to review movies we will have to share some thoughts on films.
Nance Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 8:09 PM
Aww this is sweet. you are a poet!
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:30 PM
thank you Cas.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:52 PM
This is such a loving tribute to your daughters. Daughters, especially need the words plus the actions that come from a loving father. I applaud you for letting them know Maurice!#7
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:28 PM
I am blessed to have them and they know how much I treasure them. Thank you for your kind words Connie.
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Your love for your daughters is evident Maurice...Your daughters will always be number one and come first before anyone or anything including yourself....enjoy them...hug them...tell them you love them
Smith Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:30 PM
So true.... You know when I am missing them....that is when my sad muse comes a calling
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:26 PM
I know you feel the same for your children, that is the hardest part of a break-up.
Bateman Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Maurice, A truly magnificent write here my friend!! The heartfelt passion and the emotion of feelings you've rendered here in honor of your daughters is indeed quite touching to the reader Maurice. It's touched my soft spot too. Superb in every respect!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:25 PM
thank you so much Gary, you are a good soul.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Awe, Maurice. If I were your daughter I would be bawling. Maybe I am anyway.
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:25 PM
love you Brenda.
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:34 PM
a wonderful heartfelt poem for your daughters Maurice - I am sure many of us will relate to this for our own children. Hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:24 PM
true, there is nothing like the love we feel for our children.
Chircop Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Aw the love of a father for his daughters.I can so relate to this cause since my daughter was born,all I am is her in me,and me in her.Lovely adorable poem.
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:23 PM
I am blessed Char.
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