I Never Knew Love Until I Knew You

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FROM HEART TO PAPER UNEDITED For every tear you shed from hurt physical or emotional For every tear you shed from shame rightly or wrongly My loves my heart sheds a beat I never knew love Until I knew you I love you both from my tippy toes to the peak of my silver threads Don't hurt my dears But when you do I will hold you tight Encase your fears Minimize the pain And when my heart bleeds or slightly feels a crack It's because my daughters your lives before mine.
I love you so much girls...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/19/2014 4:38:00 AM
Touched my heart, an immense feeling ))):: rajat
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Date: 10/8/2014 7:10:00 PM
What loving words you have written. I am sure your daughters will treasure tem. Thank you for your many kind comments. Love, Joyce
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 12:34:00 PM
thank you Joyce. I love your poetry.
Date: 10/8/2014 1:22:00 PM
Love in our hearts make all of us poets but when the love that inspires us is that of our children then we become divine poets! Intensely touching and tender poem my friend, Maurice! Beautiful beyond words!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 12:33:00 PM
love your comments. you are so right.
Date: 10/7/2014 10:06:00 PM
So very sweet. Do your dear daughters realize you are becoming such an amazing poet now? As well as director!! (oops, sorry I didn't mention directors in my prayer poem ; I should have said ALL those connected with the entertainment industry. It's my favorite of all the industries.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 12:31:00 PM
I saw that you use to review movies we will have to share some thoughts on films.
Date: 10/7/2014 8:09:00 PM
Aww this is sweet. you are a poet!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 12:30:00 PM
thank you Cas.
Date: 10/7/2014 4:52:00 PM
This is such a loving tribute to your daughters. Daughters, especially need the words plus the actions that come from a loving father. I applaud you for letting them know Maurice!#7
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 12:28:00 PM
I am blessed to have them and they know how much I treasure them. Thank you for your kind words Connie.
Date: 10/7/2014 4:04:00 PM
Your love for your daughters is evident Maurice...Your daughters will always be number one and come first before anyone or anything including yourself....enjoy them...hug them...tell them you love them
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 12:30:00 PM
So true.... You know when I am missing them....that is when my sad muse comes a calling
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 12:26:00 PM
I know you feel the same for your children, that is the hardest part of a break-up.
Date: 10/7/2014 3:55:00 PM
Maurice, A truly magnificent write here my friend!! The heartfelt passion and the emotion of feelings you've rendered here in honor of your daughters is indeed quite touching to the reader Maurice. It's touched my soft spot too. Superb in every respect!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 12:25:00 PM
thank you so much Gary, you are a good soul.
Date: 10/7/2014 3:42:00 PM
Awe, Maurice. If I were your daughter I would be bawling. Maybe I am anyway.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 12:25:00 PM
love you Brenda.
Date: 10/7/2014 3:34:00 PM
a wonderful heartfelt poem for your daughters Maurice - I am sure many of us will relate to this for our own children. Hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 12:24:00 PM
true, there is nothing like the love we feel for our children.
Date: 10/7/2014 3:34:00 PM
Aw the love of a father for his daughters.I can so relate to this cause since my daughter was born,all I am is her in me,and me in her.Lovely adorable poem.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 12:23:00 PM
I am blessed Char.
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