I Need You

I wrote this for my hubby :)



I Need You
    by Amy Swanson


My heart needs you...
      like water, life
           you are the soil
                my love grows in.


My soul needs you...
       a spark of light
           within my darkest moment
                  you illuminate love.


My body needs you...
         your soft caress
             you tenderly kiss away
                   the outside world.

I need you...
         my other half
              my reason to be
                   only you make me whole.


I love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/30/2009 8:16:00 AM
A true love poem as it shows the other is the nourishment you require. That's truly beautioful and your words are so soft and romantic. Michael
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Date: 1/14/2009 1:11:00 AM
Dear Amy, This is a beautiful, heartfelt declaration of love. What a wonderful gift for the man you love.
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Date: 1/8/2009 9:55:00 AM
Awwww! That is the sweetest! Everyone hopes they can find "The One", your poem is prof that you can... BRAVO! :D
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Date: 1/8/2009 9:03:00 AM
Lucky man I would say. Lovely and full of truth and honesty Amy. Thank you for your comment
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Date: 1/6/2009 6:57:00 AM
Amy, thanks by comments my poem, and for sharing it in your latest bleat! “Happy a New Year!”
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Date: 12/30/2008 8:07:00 AM
HI Amy, Such a sweet sentiment your poem conveys. Thanks for your comments on my poem, "We Must Live." Hope you have a blessed and wonderful New Year, All best, Orma
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Date: 12/29/2008 6:29:00 PM
Amy, That's a lovely name, my daughter's. What a loving expression of love for the one you love. Thank you Amy for your comment on Through the Eyes........in His grip........by His grace...........Janice
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Date: 12/29/2008 6:15:00 PM
Amy this was so beautiful, I love to read love poems like this. this was amazing. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/29/2008 2:59:00 PM
oh to be in love and write stuff like this. enjoy it while you can. john
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