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I Need Close My Eyes

then i set out to escape
i retreat to my fantasy world
i hover over a sea of waterlilies
dreamy magical and surreal



AP: 2nd place 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kiser Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 4:37 PM
You can't get any more serene in the moment. Beautiful.
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 5:50 PM
Thank you very much, ML ~
Wolf Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 7:39 PM
This resonates with me so these days... many spent in my 'man-cave.' Why come out anyway 'til Spring?!
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 7:01 AM
My thoughts exactly ~
Foster Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 8:55 AM
Lovely dream realm... Ann
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 7:01 AM
Thank you very much, Ann ~
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