I Need an Olive

I need an olive Gin and vermouth look lonely with no green jewel.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2025 8:58:00 PM

Wow. Such a cool Ku. Love it

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/1/2025 8:12:00 PM

Dear Robert, indeed, the olive is the cherry on top, so to speak. I enjoyed your wonderful senryu. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2025 2:02:00 AM

- Nice as a decoration, Robert ...don't like eating it :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2025 1:43:00 AM

Creative work. I wonder how that olive feels after being pickled then soaked in alcohol. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/31/2025 5:01:00 PM

yes, tis true. Got a kick out of your poem. wishing you a splendid evening, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 7/31/2025 4:55:00 PM

I hear you, Robert, nice Senryu. First visit, but I'll be back. Following your poetry now. A poet friend to be, in Texas, Bill