I Need an Olive

I need an olive Gin and vermouth look lonely with no green jewel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 8:58 PM
Wow. Such a cool Ku. Love it
Ashley Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 8:12 PM
Dear Robert, indeed, the olive is the cherry on top, so to speak. I enjoyed your wonderful senryu. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 2:02 AM
- Nice as a decoration, Robert ...don't like eating it :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 1:43 AM
Creative work. I wonder how that olive feels after being pickled then soaked in alcohol. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 5:01 PM
yes, tis true. Got a kick out of your poem. wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
Baker Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 4:55 PM
I hear you, Robert, nice Senryu. First visit, but I'll be back. Following your poetry now. A poet friend to be, in Texas, Bill
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