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I Need a Friend

I need a friend right now I need guidance I need someone to show me how How to just be. I thought I was happy I thought I liked me I guess I am not the person I thought I could be. I need a friend right now someone to share my thoughts someone to be my sounding board someone who understands me someone who realizes I should not be ignored. I know the truth that lies beneath the beauty and the smiles I know the truth But you see, it is much easier to live a life of denial You smile and grin, laugh and pretend. Oh, but still remains the dark behind the light I know the truth. One day the closet door will open One day the make up will fade and the world will know what I have known all along You can't hide your pain you can't store your fears you can't bury your sorrows you can't change what's done you can't pretend your okay anymore you can't be that person everyone wants you to be The mask has been ripped from your face and the world now knows what I have known all along you don't know how to live this life alone. you are broken and scared and fear that there is no way for repair The damage has been done your life incomplete you have been stripped of all your strength and beat you are left broken and scared and no one is there. You are alone and I have known this all along I know the truth I know I can't be alone I need a friend right now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/31/2012 4:18:00 PM
Beautiful,... I need a friend too! In a room full of people sometimes I feel like I'm still all alone.
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Deeana Valencia
Date: 10/31/2012 11:32:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment, this poem was written with tears. I'm glad I no longer feel this pain. Writing and believing in myself has truly healed me. However I can always use a friend!
Date: 10/30/2012 6:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Deeana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Deeana Valencia
Date: 10/30/2012 1:49:00 PM
Thank you for the comment!
Date: 10/30/2012 5:04:00 AM
Sounds like you are talking about yourself, cheer up : ) love lizabeth
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Deeana Valencia
Date: 10/30/2012 1:51:00 PM
I was, but this was written a while back and Ive found writting has healed my pain. Thanks for the comment!
Date: 10/30/2012 3:44:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Deeana! Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - You write very well - looking forward to more soon. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Deeana Valencia
Date: 10/30/2012 1:52:00 PM
Thanks for the nice welcome, I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 10/30/2012 1:51:00 AM
nice to know you Deeana... and glad to be your friend,,, <3<3<3 nice poem..enjoyed !!! SK
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Deeana Valencia
Date: 10/30/2012 1:53:00 PM
Thanks for the comment!
Date: 10/30/2012 1:04:00 AM
Oh my! This really hits the heart<3 I'm always looking for new friends if ya really need one. :o) Nice write!
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Deeana Valencia
Date: 10/30/2012 1:54:00 PM
Thanks you!

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