I Need

I Need....... ------------------- I need a magic needle To sew, Abundant love with my heart, Dignity with my society, And a package of peace With my country as a whole! Dear friends, This is my goal. I need a magic soap To clean, Rage from my soul, Passion from my society, And ferocity of violence from my country as a whole! Dear friends, This is my goal. I need a magic brush To paint, Vicious glimpses of terrorism, Enormity of corruption, Darkness of dirty politics, And the eye of poverty for my country as a whole! Dear friends, This is my goal. ---------------------------- By, Manmath Kumar Dalei/Odisha/India

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Jeremy Proehl

Date: 5/25/2016 7:44:00 PM

Hi Manmath, I love this poem. Thank you for sharing these words. I hope that I will see love prevail as the norm one day. JP

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/17/2016 11:45:00 PM

It can definitely feel as though we need some magic to cure those things ... otherwise they'd just keep on repeating themselves over and over! Perhaps the magic starts from within ... good first poem post, Manmath ... straight from the get-go, stating your concerns through verse.

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/15/2016 2:26:00 PM

Wonderfully written piece.

James Inman

Date: 4/17/2016 12:21:00 AM

Wonderful dreams you have Manmath.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2016 12:39:00 PM

Your goals are honourable ones, Manmath; we all want the best for our countries, mostly that they be free of fighting and corruption. I enjoyed this your first poem at Soup...well done! ~ Regards // paul

Wendy Pierson

Date: 4/8/2016 3:09:00 AM

Hello Manmath, Thanks for gratiously commenting on my attempt at art very late in life. I'm a disciple of Mystic Urdu poet Sant Darshan Singh Ji and singer Mata Harbhajan Kaur Ji and current Master Sant Rajinder Singh Ji of Science of Spirituality. Something drew me to enter Trader Joe's contest! Hug back.

Jean Murray

Date: 4/4/2016 7:43:00 PM

You need not worry here about exploring your potential. You will receive nothing but praise and encouragement. I have written HOLI MOLI for you, just now. All the best, Jean.

Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/5/2016 5:57:00 AM

Thanks. I will go through to ur poem "Holi Moli".

Constance La France

Date: 4/4/2016 1:54:00 AM

MD, your poem is powerful and full of hope for your future, I think it is quite wonderful, and I am loving it 7. Congratulations also on your win with it and welcome to poetrysoup, I hope you enjoy the journey.

Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/5/2016 5:58:00 AM

Thank u BW.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/4/2016 12:33:00 AM

A warm welcome to Poetry Soup! This is a wonderful poem to introduce yourself to this club. Congratulations on your top win! Your poem touched my heart. Blessings, Connie

Noel Villarosa

Date: 4/3/2016 12:41:00 AM

Very interesting to read, congratulations on your winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/5/2016 5:59:00 AM

Thanks a lot..........

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/1/2016 9:01:00 AM

Hi Manmath, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.

Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/1/2016 11:39:00 AM

Thank u....

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2016 6:01:00 AM

Many congrats on your win in the contest Manmath:-) hugs jan xx

Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/1/2016 7:18:00 AM

Thanks a lot

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2016 1:24:00 AM

THis is a great job for your very first post at Soup. Way to go . Congrats in the contest.

Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/1/2016 3:16:00 AM

Thank u.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 1:00:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win Manmath..

Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/1/2016 3:17:00 AM

Thank u mam.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 11:39:00 PM

WOW, thanks for joining my contest, Manmath, Congratulations on your Awesome Any Poem #38 win. Stop by my blog "GONE," drop by and leave a smile if you'd like. :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/1/2016 3:18:00 AM

Thanks a lot.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2016 1:01:00 PM

I see your needs and hope you achieve your goals Manmath - great first poem welcome to poetry soup:-) hugs Jan xx

Manmath Dalei
Date: 3/31/2016 1:15:00 PM

Thank u very much.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 8:36:00 AM

You have desirable needs... my friend, heart blessed goals. A powerful poem. I've enjoyed this a second time. Hope to see you post a new poem. Hugs.... Linda

Manmath Dalei
Date: 3/31/2016 1:17:00 PM

Thanks a lot for encouraging me.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 6:03:00 AM

Manmath, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Manmath Dalei
Date: 3/31/2016 1:18:00 PM

Thank u.

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 3/31/2016 8:37:00 AM

Hi , Manmath... I sent you soup mail... :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 3/31/2016 4:07:00 AM

Nice