I Must Say Good-Bye - Part - I Don'T Know - 2

I have drank the Tears of Death, My fears swallowed in One Breath
I felt the frozen flames of Hell, I hear the tolling of Death's Iron Bell
  I'm sorry I blacked out for awhile I will continue this Tomorrow
With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/18/2012 6:20:00 PM
This is very sad Harry, hope you are ok, love Elizabeth xox
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Date: 7/3/2012 10:11:00 AM
a deep expression from depths of soul HG my silent beau.. I too left PS for a spell but am returning slowly amid hand problems and life commitments .. I luv your new contest..much success.. I will update my blog shortly.. but am not posting too many as before..luv.. always your Sweetheart Poetes..
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Date: 6/26/2012 3:57:00 PM
Dream...dream on in health and happiness we are happy for the moments you are here! Light & Love
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Date: 6/25/2012 3:24:00 PM
This a beautiful poem and I'm so sorry that something so tragic in your life had to happen for this. So sorry for the loss of your wife, but I'm sure you can get some real beauties for you Member contest.
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Date: 6/22/2012 9:11:00 AM
This has great poetic qualities..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Sara
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Date: 6/14/2012 10:30:00 AM
Even though Hell makes things hurt more.at least there's beauty within it. ~always&forever
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Date: 5/29/2012 8:53:00 PM
even unfinished it shines!
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Date: 5/10/2012 1:26:00 PM
Amazing work. I hope you are doing okay. Will be reading some more of your marvelous work! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/6/2012 10:44:00 AM
Soup mail my dear poet.....
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Date: 5/6/2012 10:43:00 AM
STUPENDOUS WRITE !!!
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Date: 5/5/2012 10:10:00 PM
Daniel, drinking tears of death.. a very stong image and line.. hope you are fine.... have yourself a good night~PD
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Date: 5/5/2012 4:46:00 AM
....and I will be back for its follow dear poet ! Have a blessed weekend sir...much love, james
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Date: 5/5/2012 2:44:00 AM
So poetic,...your goodbyes...You are really good at saying "ggodbye"...this is really just a joke, right?...Get some sleep and call me in the morning!!! hahah. Gwendolen Good Sam Class of '68! :)
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