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I Miss You Dad

I miss you Dad Leafless trees branches entwined clutching at the wind. Lifeless eyes a hallow embrace clutching at my heart. Mirthless tears pouring down salt into my wounded soul. Listless eyes turned quickly away by my haunted essence. the trees seem to mourn the passage of a season, while I Morn the passing of a gentle man of reason rlm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/24/2011 7:02:00 AM
I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2011 1:22:00 PM
I to mourn a "gentle man" called Dad, I know your pain and share it, your poem is full of love and sadness and beauty~~
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Date: 3/23/2011 12:45:00 PM
A very very touching poem ..... I liked it very much indeed....may I suggest the spelling of "morn" should be "mourn"...best wishes...Syd
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