I Miss You

I am walking along the shore,
the sun is returning to its home.
I feel the freedom it brings to me.
As I watch the sunset over the sea.

Alone, I sat down in the sand.
Pour it on my hands and let it down.
I close my eyes,take a deep breathe on my lungs.
"God! I miss you!"...whispers on my mind.

It's been too long since you'd been mine.
Your lips and burning kiss slave me in the night.
The touch of your skin,a feeling so divine.
I feel it in my soul,even now that you're gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Michael Tanjang Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 3:10 PM
SO SAD WOWWW!! good though
Ink-U-Script Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Very beautiful!!!
Torres Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Thank You, PACE!!! ..^__^
Williams Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Aiyah an excellent image you portray, love the romance in it...David
Hamilton Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 11:10 AM
how beautiful Aiyah it speaks volumes hugs
Melugin Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Dear AiyaH, The sunset crying, Your hands, an hourglass,Your breath stolen and the memory makes love to you! You are a poetic wonder woman! 7+ luv, chuck
Torres Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 2:38 AM
Chuck....my dearest Chuck...your words always hit my heart so much!!! ...if I am a poetic wonder woman...then you are OUR poetic Superman!!! ..thanks for dropping by my good friend.. >__<
Mills-Kelly Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 3:29 PM
BEAUTIFUL.... Flowed wonderfully... I really liked this allot hun !!
Torres Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 2:41 AM
my dear Debbie...though we just know each other recently...you've been so nice to this young lady.. he he.. i appreciate your comment so much!! mwahugs!!!! >__<
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 9:03 AM
- A touching and well written poem - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 3:38 AM
i like your new avatar photo..he he... grrr!!!! ..can't still move on loving those furry creatures!!!,,, >__<
Torres Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 2:43 AM
My dearest Anne....Thank you so much!!! ,,may you have a great weekend as well ...huggs >__<
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February 14, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Aiyah, thank you for the sentimental and heartwrench walk. I like the feeling you express, where you find yourself lost in a divine moment. excellent poem... Linda
Torres Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 2:47 AM
PD...thank you for a lot of comments i received from you...may the world be nice to you in every journey you will take....Thank you so much!!!!! >__<
A  Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 6:57 PM
Hi Aiyah, I hope you don't get mad when I say this. This is the saddest poem I've read today. WHY? You don't have to answer, I did enjoy the write. SKAT
Torres Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 2:50 AM
SKAT...why should i get angry??>..of course i am!!! ..ha ha.. your comments are like fuel to my soul...that's why i keep on writing..thank you so much!!!!>__<
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