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I Miss You

Like the sky without the moon Like the fork without the spoon Like the pea without the pod Like the faith without the God Like the well without the wish Like the ocean without the fish Like the tree without the branch Like the music without the dance Like the wine without the cheese Like the thanks without the please Like the thrill without the chase Like the rat without the race Like the life without the chance Like the love without the romance Like the grass without the dew And like the me without the you … I miss you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/28/2010 10:27:00 PM
This is so simple yet so heartfelt, Tony, can't help but feel really wistful when I read this, and I could only imagine how difficult it must be to take care of your daughter alone, but she sure is so lucky to have such a doting and loving dad as you--I wish you all the best! take care always :) --btw glad you liked my leave me hanging entry :) you'll find out soon enough what happens next ;)
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Date: 4/27/2010 12:01:00 PM
beautifully written! very much enjoyed
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